FF: D for Desire #2 (Ch 15 - 21)

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

it was a beautiful chap

how they control their desires n how he pampered her

going home mean's?

loved it

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preethi28

@preethi28

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

awesome update.

freakinggg hottt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉

i don't think they'll be able to resist each other for too long.

and it is about time that either of the two realize their changing feelings.

thanks for the pm.😊

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628497

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

The Desires have made dem reach an unexpected destination.

What I loved d most is dat u have stuck to ur title and theme.

Most writers get confused and the story takes up different twist which totally different from what it promised in the beginning!

U have finished 22 parts majestically and dere's a lot more in the story!

I love the way everything is working out! It's cool!

1 of my fav's along with Lemons and Limes

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Wow he's taking her home ..😃 I guess this one simple gesture from Arnav says a lot about how he feel about Khusi . I had a big smile on my face on this last line and i don't know really why.. 😃
The morning scene was homely. Arnav making sure Khusi is comfortable in every was really sweet.
And boy was ASR nervous over his breakfast making skills 😆 That was really cute.
The night flashback was hot but i like how he took things slowly n relishing every bit of it. It has passion like before but the love n warmth were the added factors. I bow down to both of them for such self control 😳
I so look forward to the next part..

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

wow.. they can control.. good..

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nehaarshi

@nehaarshi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Amazing, Fabulous and Beautifully written :)
Just loved it!!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

Night was passionate

Loved hw they controlled

Arnav gave Khushi jhatka

We are going home hehehe

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shona136

@shona136

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

awesome awesome awesome...!!!! great intensity...👏 luved their passion filled moments yet their level of restraint and control...😆

update soon...👏👏👏

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

I'm loving the pace and the focus on their relationship. It's so refreshing to read a story that has a more modern set of characters and explores the relationship and characters rather than a convoluted story line.