Jaldi aaiyye Arnavji! Thread Two - Page 82

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Beautiful..:)
romance was superb..:D
next part soon :)
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that was sweet update, loved the way buaji understood his intentions evry time,
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bus..truck..car...arnav..LOL that was very funny...😆
khushi you better talk to arnav about you both ...not others😉
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Translation for Part 51
Amma nearly ran to the door when there was a sharp knock on it.
Her anxiety kept increasing with every passing second.
Buaji: Slow down Garima! Otherwise the handle will break..
The moment amma opened the door & saw ArShi,her anxiety vanished.
Khushi,who was in Arnav's arms,looked a bit embarassed,a bit shy & very happy.
Amma didnt fail to notice her smudged sindoor.
On the other hand,Arnav was as cool & confident as ever!
The smile on his lips told amma that he had resolved all his issues with Khushi.
She was certain that he would not stop talking to Khushi from the next day.
Buaji's voice interrupted amma's chain of thoughts.
Buaji: Aye Garima! For how long will u keep staring like this? Nandkisore has been standing with Parmeswari in his arms since sucha long time. Let them come inside..
Amma: Yes.. come bitwa..
Khushi: Did babuji go to sleep?
Amma: Yes. Since he was tired..
Khushi: Its good that he slept. He needs to sleep on time. Did he take his medicines?
Amma nods.
Then she proceeds to serve water for ArShi.
Khushi(murmurs softly): Put me down now. I can sit down on my own.
Arnav(whispers): When I'm here,u dont need to take the trouble..
Khushi(murmurs softly): There's no trouble here. And dont even try to make me sit down! U'll get knee pain & back ache if u do..
Buaji: What r u both whispering about,hayin?
Khushi(smiles): Nn.. no.. nothing buaji! Nothing at all!
Buaji: I've served dinner. Come here & have it.
Khushi: Ji.
She glared at Arnav & he gently put her down.
Arnav: Sit carefully..
Khushi: Ji.
Amma: All Khusi's favorite dishes r here!
Buaji(handing a disposable plate): Take this Nandkisore! Tonight my Sanka devi will eat properly! Two reasons for that- one is that all her favourite food items r here & the second is Arnav babua is also here!
Arnav: Y do u say that buaji? Didnt Khushi eat properly durin the last 5 days?
Buaji: She did eat but she didnt relish the food,like she usually does! Her thoughts kept drifting away from the food! Whereas tonight, she started eating the moment I handed her the plate!
Arnav shook his head when he saw Khushi gobbling up jilebi after jilebi.
Arnav: Slow down! The food isnt running away! And u can eat for as long as u want to..
Khushi: Dont stop me tonight! Let me eat the way I'm eating! U better focus on ur plate. God knows what u ate in London? I'm not sure if u had proper meals!Buaji,dont leave him easily tonight! Feed him till he's full!
Arnav: No buaji.I'm fine..
Buaji: Areh u didnt even start eating,Nandkisore! Come on,start now. U must b tired after travelling from London to Delhi & Delhi to Katra! U must eat more food!
Khushi: Absolutely!
She gives a naughty smile to Arnav who glares at her.
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Later that night...
Buaji: Sanka devi,u come & sleep next to me. And Arnav babua,u sleep next to her,near the window.
Arnav: Ji buaji.
Buaji: And make sure u apply this cream before going to sleep..
She passed on a tube of mosquito repellent cream to him via amma.
Arnav: I.. dont use this..
Amma: Here u'll hav to use this,bitwa.. Else the mosquitoes wont let u sleep in peace.
Arnav: But the mosquito repellent mat is working naa..
He pointed towards the switch board.
Amma: Its not enough to combat the mosquitoes. It would b better if u.. apply this cream.
Khushi: Plz apply it,Arnavji..
Arnav reluctantly agrees.
Buaji: Everyone go to sleep now. We need to get up early tomorrow morning. We havnt even packed the luggage yet.
Arnav: Whats the plan for tomorrow?
Khushi: I'd thought of going to Jammu. But u told Amanji to book a 5 star hotel in Srinagar..
Arnav: Booking can b cancelled anytime.Not a problem! I'll ask him to book a hotel in Jammu.
Khushi: Dont call him right now.Y do u want to distrb him at this hour?
Arnav: They mustve just reached Delhi. It would b better to call them right now. Give me ur phone..
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After calling Aman,Arnav wishes buaji & amma goodnight.
Amma: Lemme switch off the light.
Arnav: I'll do that,ammaji.
The first thing which Arnav did after lying on his matress was reaching out for Khushi,who was sleeping on his left.
He held her hand for a moment before bringing it to his mouth to kiss it.
He covered the back of her hand & her palm with several kisses.
Khushi's bangles jingled which made Khushi extra conscious & embarassed.
She wordlessly took Arnav's hand & kept it on her bangles.
Khushi(thinks): Arnavji must have understood that I want him to remove my bangles.
To her shock & disbelief,instead of removing her bangles Arnav started playing with them,pushing them up & down her wrist,liking the sound they made everytime he touched them.
Khushi(thinks): What is Arnavji doing?!
She kept her left hand firmly on Arnav's hand to stop him.
Arnav: What?
Khushi(even more shocked): Ssshhh!!
Arnav(whispered): Oops! Sorry! What happened?
Khushi(whispers): What r u doing? I wanted u to remove the bangles since they were making noise! U started playing with them & they're making even more noise now!
Arnav(whispers): Y do u want to remove them? Leave them on ur wrists! (touching her bangles) They look good on ur wrists!
Khushi(whispers): And what about the jingling sound they're making?
Arnav(whispers): Let them jingle! (sighs)I was waiting since the last 5 days to hear this sound!
Khushi(whispers): U're not the only one having ears over here! Have some shame.. What if Buaji & amma hear the sound?
Before Arnav could answer..
Buaji: R eyes & ears r closed,Sanka devi! Dont u worry!
Amma giggled a bit.
Khushi gave her trademark shocked expression first & glared at Arnav next.
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With the help of the light tat was coming from under the window,Arnav saw Khushi glaring at him.
He mouthed sorry.
Khushi moved his hand away & was about to remove her bangles when Arnav stopped her by firmly gripping her wrists.
A small gasp escaped Khushi's lips & Arnav immediately loosened his grip.
Then he gently removed her bangles from both her wrists,one at a time.
Khushi pointed to her pillow & Arnav kept her bangles on the floor,slightly away from her pillow.
Then he turned to his left and propped himself on his elbow.
Khushi put her finger on her mouth & glared at him.
Arnav nodded to assure her that he would not make noise.
Khushi stopped glaring and released a long breath.
No sooner did Arnav hold her wrist,than her breath got hitched once more.
Starting from her wrist to her upper arm,Arnav planted numerous kisses on her arm.
Khushi closed her eyes & revelled in the sensations that his warm lips generated on his cold arm.
When Arnav kissed her shoulder,Khushi opened her eyes.
She looked at Arnav & shook her head.
Arnav placed his hand over her eyes & forced them shut.
Then he proceeded to finish his task.
He covered her shoulder with gentle kisses.
But when he reached the crook of her neck & shoulder,he couldnt resist himself.
Khushi caught her lower lip between her teeth,anticipating her husband's next move.
Arnav felt the goosebumps that were sprouting on Khushi's arm as he nuzzled the area & planted open mouthed kisses on it.
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He wanted to take a bite of the dewy skin on her neck.
He wanted to cup & palm her breasts.
He wanted to explore every nook & cranny of her mouth.
He wanted to taste every part of her delicious body.
He so wanted to enter her and make love to her all through the night.
But he knew he couldnt do any of the above,for obvious reasons.
So after kissing the right side of her neck,he settled down on his pillow like a good boy and waited for the torturous night to get over.
Khushi felt sad for herself & her husband.
She wanted him as much as he wanted her.
But she knew she could do nothing about it.
She was lamenting the situation when a thought crossed her mind.
She gently patted Arnav's shoulder.
Arnav looked at her & mouthed What?
Khushi(whispers very softly): U shift on this mattress. Let me sleep on that one.
Arnav(whispers): Y?
Khushi(whispers): Dont ask questions! Just do as I say!
Arnav(whispers): Buaji is sleeping next to u..
Khushi(whispers): So what? She wont eat u up! Come this side!
Arnav did what he was told,without knowing the purpose of the whole exercise.
The moment he turned to his right,towards Khushi,Khushi surprised him by turning to her left & hugging him.
Arnav(whispers): What r u doing?U must lie down on ur back..
Khushi(whispers): I know that. I'd been sleeping on my back since the last few days. But tonight u're here. And we both know this fact quite well that despite being so close to each physically,we wont b able to sleep! So I thought y not sleep in the same position in which we sleep in Shantivan?
Arnav(whispers): But Khushi..
Khushi(whispers): No buts!My right foot is injured,not my left foot!
Arnav(whispers): What if u get a baitaa on ur left one?
Khushi(whispers): U're here naa?! U take care of it! Come on,now pull me closer to urself,like u do in Shantivan.
Arnav smiled & put his arms around her,pulling her closer.
They both sighed at once.
Khushi(whispers): Now go to sleep.. Goodnight!
Arnav kissed the top of her head before wishing her goodnight.
Very soon Khushi drifted off to sleep.
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When Arnav woke up the next morning,he found Khushi in the same position as the previous night.
He smiled & ran a hand through her silky hair.
Then he realized something & turned to his left.
Much to his delight,he did not find buaji,amma & babuji in the room.
Arnav(thinks): They must hav gone to hav tea.
He glanced at the door,which was fully closed.
And then he glanced at his sleeping wife.
Arnav(thinks): Should I wake Khushi up or should I let her sleep?
He decided not to wake her up,much against his own wishes.
Arnav(thinks): Bcoz of chatting with me over the phone, Khushi couldnt sleep well during the first 3 nights. Last night we slept late. She needs rest..
He planted a lingering kiss on the top of her head.
Khushi shifted slightly & looked at him.
Khushi: U woke up?
Arnav(surprised): U're awake? Since when?
Khushi: Since the last.. 5 minutes or so..
Arnav: Y didnt u wake me up?
Khushi: Coz u were very tired last night.. So I thought I'll let u sleep for some more time.
Arnav smiled as kissed her forehead.
Arnav: Goodmorning!
Khushi(smiles): Goodmorning!Now leave my waist. I need to go & brush my teeth..
Arnav let go of her waist.
Khushi sat up & stretched her arms.
Arnav also sat up.
Khushi found him looking at her intently ith a naughty smile on his lips.
Khushi(warns): No!
Arnav came & sat right in front of her.
Arnav: Y not?
Khushi: Areh! What if amma,babuji & buaji come back?
Arnav(cups her face): We'll see what to do when they come back!
Khushi(pushes him away): No! Did u forget what happened last night? It was good that babuji had gone off to sleep much earlier. Had he heard the sound of my bangles..
She shook her head.
Arnav: Relax Khushi! Just one kiss! Then I'll let u go!
Khushi: Absolutely not! U'll start with a kiss & then very soon u'll.. cross ur limits! And if they come back while we're.. we wont get time to compose ourselves!
She was about to get up when Arnav stopped her.
Arnav: Ok fine! We can surely hug?
Khushi(reluctantly): Ok..
He opened his arms & Khushi hugged him,resting her head on his chest.
Barely a few seconds later,she lifted her head & squirmed.
Khushi: Arnavji.. my hair got stuck in ur button..
Arnav: Wait! U leave it.. I'll take it out.
While he was untangling her hair,Arnav's eyes fell on Khushi's cheek.He kissed it.
Khushi closed her eyes when he did so.
When she felt that he was about to kiss her lips,she opened her eyes.
Khushi(warns): Bas! (enough)
Arnav smirks before pecking her lips.
Arnav: Train!
Khushi(confused): Ji!?
Arnav kissed her other cheek & replied: Car
Khushi (rolls her eyes): Humara matlab tha Hindi wala bas..
Arnav(kisses her nose): Truck
Khushi: Arnavji.. I said bas!
Arnav(kisses her parting): Ship
He was about to kiss her lips when Khushi hit his lips with her palm.
Arnav: What the!?
Khushi: Cycle!
Arnav held her hand before kissing her lips.
Arnav: Motorcycle..
Khushi hit his mouth with the other hand.
Khushi: Rickshaw!
Arnav held that hand before kissing her lips.
Arnav: Tempo.
He nibbled her lower lip without waiting for her.
Khushi(tries to push him away): Arr.. navv.. ji..!
Arnav: Foul!
Khushi(puzzled): Ji!?
Arnav: There's no mode of transport having my name! Now that u've done a foul u will get punished!
He left her hands,cupped her face & claimed her lips,all within 2 seconds.
Khushi closed her eyes & held his shoulders for support.
A few seconds later they heard the sound of footsteps outside the door.
Khushi pushed Arnav away & tried to free her hair from the button.
Arnav(whispers): Relax!
Before Khushi could say anything they heard the sound of the latch.
Khushi managed to free her hair & while she was trying to get up she pulled her left leg's muscle.
Khushi(wails): Aaahh!
Arnav: Khushi!
Amma & buaji(entering the room): What happened?
Khushi: Baitaa...!
Arnav helped her sit down.
Arnav: What was the need to get up so fast? Straighten ur legs..
Khushi: I'll do whatever u say bt plz dont scold me! Aah!
Arnav: I'll take care of it..
Khushi: Make it alright fast,Arnavji! Its paining like hell!
Arnav: Wait..
Khushi(hisses): Aah!
Amma: Khusi,ur babuji has gone to bring drsahab over here. U wait bitiya, I'll call him.
Khushi: Ji.
Amma: Come jiji..
Buaji: Y me?
Amma: Come naa! We'll b back soon, bitwa.
Arnav nodded.
After coming out of the room..
Buaji: Sanka devi becomes a small child in Arnav babuas presence! Her foot was in bad shape two days back but she was quite back then. And look at her now!
Amma: I knew it jiji! Everytime Khusi said she was fine,I knew she wasnt fine. She was in pain. But she didnt want us to worry for her,hence she pretended to b fine. (smiles) Its only Arnav bitwa, in front of whom,she need not pretend anything! She can share everything with Bitwa! She knows that she can share all her worries,joys n sorrows with him!
Buaji: U're right,Nandkisore!Sanka devi pretends to b strong in r presence. She doesnt hesitate to show her weaknesses in front of Arnav babua.
Amma: Arnav bitwa takes such good care of r Khusi! Isnt it jiji!
Buaji(nods): He is saaksaat Nandkisore!
Amma: Ji!
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After the dr. checks Khushi,Arnav takes him aside to speak to him.
Arnav: How is she,doctor?
Dr. There's nothing to worry,Mr. Raizada. Khushiji is fine. The other foot will take another 2-3 days to heal completely. Till then she must take her medicines & bandage her foot.
Arnav: But y does the muscle in her left leg get pulled time n again?
Dr: Thats bcoz of weakness.. Whenever that happens, plz apply balm on her foot. She'll feel better. Now plz excuse me..
Arnav wasnt satisfied with his answers so he made a mental note 2 get Khushi treated by the best doctor in Jammu after shifting to the 5 star hotel.
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An hour later..
Shubham: Good morning sa'ab!
Arnav: Morning! Here r the car keys.
He hands him the keys.
Arnav: How much time will it take to bring the bigger car?
Shubham: Half an hour.
Arnav(nods): Try to come back asap.The moment u reach here,give a call on Khushi's mobile.
Shubham: Ji sa'ab.
When Arnav turned,he found Murli waiting for him.
Arnav: Morning Murli!
Murli: Jai Mata di sahab! Manager sahab is here. U can meet him now.
Arnav: I'll b there in a short while. U combine the bills of my 1 day's stay &.. Guptaji's 5 days' stay. I'll pay the total amount.
Murli: But Khusiji has already paid her bills!
Arnav(confused): When did she pay?
Murli: Yesterday evening..
Arnav: Ok. So keep my bill ready. I'll b there shortly..
Murli: Ji.
When Arnav was about to enter the room,he found Khushi coming out of the bathroom.
He immediately went to her.
Khushi stopped as soon as she saw him.
Khushi(whispers): No!
Arnav: What no?
Khushi(murmurs): Dont lift me up!
Arnav: Fine. Atleast take my support
..
Khushi: Ok.
The moment she placed her arm around Arnav's waist,he bent down & scooped her in his arms.
Khushi: Areh!
Arnav: Khushi I've told u earlier as well- I dont care! Let them see & gossip as much as they want to!
Khushi: But..
Arnav(interrupts): Since we're leaving this place pretty soon,u also shouldnt bother about what they say/think!
That said,he started walking with her towards their room.
Some heads turned upon seeing them, one aunty stared at them with her mouth hanging open while some other people whispered.
Ignoring them all Arnav carried his wife proudly,with his head held high.
Once they were in the room,Arnav put her down gently.
Khushi stood in front of the mirror & removed the towel covering her hair.
Some strands of her wet hair clung to her face.
Arnav's hands itched to tuck those strands behind her ear but he looked away.
Buaji(smiles): Whats the matter Arnav babua?
Arnav: Nothing buaji..
Buaji: Sasi babua,come with me.. I want to visit the temple outside the saraay.
Babuji(getting the hint): Yes didi.Plz come..
Buaji left after closing the door.
Arnav walked upto Khushi who stood transfixed in front of the mirror.
Arnav turned her around to face him.
Arnav(tucking her hair behind her ear): So finally u washed ur hair?
Khushi nodded.
Arnav: Great! Bring me ur sindoor. I'll apply it right now.
She walked with unsure steps towards her bag & removed her sindoordani from it.
Then she walked back to Arnav and handed it to him.
Arnav filled her parting with sindoor & then stopped to admire his work.
Arnav: I've applied it in a straight line! See for urself..
Khushi turned towards the mirror.
Arnav(smiles): U've stuck ur bindis on this mirror as well!?
Khushi doesnt say anything.
Arnav hugged her from behind & rested his head on her shoulder.
Arnav: Did I apply the sindoor correctly?
Khushi: hmm.
Arnav: what happened? R u angry?
Khushi: No.. I was.. thinking..
Arnav: What?
Khushi: I made two promises yesterday. But u didnt make any!
Arnav(confused): Which promise r u talking about?
Khushi looked at his reflection in the mirror before answering.
Khushi: Promise me-u will never do what u did last night!
Arnav: What did I do?
Khushi: U were not speaking to me properly. U were not scolding me. U were swallowing ur anger & telling me that u wont talk to me. Promise me that u wont do any of these again!
Arnav(smiles): I promise! Bas?(enough)
Khushi(with a mischievious grin): Train!
Arnav (trns her around): Truck..
Before he could kiss her the door opened & in came amma.
Amma: Jiji,y dont u.. (looks at ArHi) a.. I a..
Arnav: I'll.. go n pay the bill.
He left the room as fast as possible.
Khushi didnt know where to go.
She wishes the Earth would open up & swallow her.
But when it didnt,she turned towards the mirror & started combing her hair with her fingers.
Amma: Khusi,bitiya do u need a comb?
Khushi: Nn.. no! No amma! I'll.. comb my hair with my fingers today.
Amma stiffled a giggle & went outside the room.
Khushi(sighs): Hey Devi Maiyya! This lard governer is too much! When he becomes Majnoo he troubles me! He troubles me even when he's not in Majnoo mood! He cant stay without being naughty! (smiles)Majnoo Singh Raizada!
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Half an hour later..
Arnav helped babuji inside the black SUV.
Babuji: Thanks a lot,damad babu!
Arnav: U're welcome!
Amma & buaji sat on either sides of babuji while Arnav & Khushi sat at the back.
Khushi: Shubham ji,plz switch on the radio..
Shubham: Ji madamji.
Khushi was surprised.
She looked at Arnav suspiciously.
Arnav(mouths): What?
Khushi(whispered): Yesterday Shubhamji was calling me bhabhiji. But today.. he's calling me madamji. Y?
Arnav shrugs.
Khushi(whispers): U told him to call me madam,isnt it?
Arnav(whispers): Sit quietly & listen to the song! U wanted to listen to songs since last night right?
Khushi(whispers): U also sit quietly! Dont play any mischief. Okay?
Arnav(salutes): Yes ma'm!
Khushi made a face when the song started.
Khushi: This song is not nice,Shubhamji.. Plz tune in to some other channel.
Amma: Khusi,bitiya y r u bothering him?Let him drive in peace.
Shubham: No,no! Shes not bothering me! I'll change the channel..
The lyrics of the song stirred something deep within Khushi.
Tumko maine chaha bhi hai.
Tum hi ko maine gham bhi diye.
Sharminda hoon.
Sharminda hoon.
(Translatn: I have loved u.
I have hurt u.
I'm ashamed.
I'm ashamed.)
While the music played,Khushi looked at Arnav & held his hand tightly.
Arnav(mouths): What?
Khushi gestured towards the car stereo.
Arnav listened to the song with rapt attention.
Female: Tumko maine chaha bhi hai.
Tum hi ko maine gham bhi diye.
Sharminda hoon,
Sharminda hoon.
Sach kehti hoon,
Dil hi dil me
Sharminda hoon.
(T: I have loved u.
And I have hurt u.
I'm ashamed.
I'm telling the truth,
I'm ashamed.)
Arnav kept his right hand on Khushi's hand & gazed into her eyes while the song played in the background.
Male: Duniya jo chahe keh le
Par tujhko milne se pehle
Khud se bhi na mil saka tha
Main..
Khoya sa tha main,
Uljha sa tha..
Ki tujh bin meri
Naa thi koi raahein.
Meri zindagi tujh bin thi jaise
Os ki boond,
Patti se ab giri,tab giri..
O.. os ki boond,
Patti se ab giri,tab giri..
(No matter what the world say
But before I met u
I was not aware of my identity.
I was lost
And confused
In ur absence,
I had no roads(goals) in life.
My life,without u,
Was like
A drop of dew,
Which could fall from the leaf
At any moment.)
Arnav wrapped his left arm around Khushi,who didnt stop him this time.
They listened to the song which was totally in sync with their feelings.
Female: Main agar saans thi,
Tum khushboo the..
Kaise-kaise
Pal,pal jaadoo k..
(If I was the breath
U were the fragrance
We spent such
magical moments together)
Khushi recalled all the magical moments she'd spent with Arnav & a smile automatically came on her lips.
She came back to the present when Arnav tapped her hand.
Khushi: Ji?
Arnav(whispers): Listen to the song..
Khushi shifted her attention to the song.
Male: Kaagaz tha main,
Hawaa me udta.
Tune mujh pe
Jaane kya likh diya?
Ab toh,mujhko
Naye shabd hai mil gaye,
Hain shabd yeh pyaar k..
(T: I was paper
Flying in the air.
I dont know
What u wrote on me?
Now I have got
New words,
These r words of love.)
The first verse was repeated.
Khushi(whispers): Bcoz of whatever I did.. I'm ashamed of myself.
Arnav(whispers): U need not b ashamed. U realized ur mistake & promised not to repeat it. Thats enough for me!
Khushi smiles & focuses again on the song.
Sitaaron se aage jahaan
Aur bhi hai.
Abhi ishq k imtihaan
Aur bhi hain,
aur bhi hain.
(T: There is a world
beyond the stars.
There r still some
Tests in love
which we need to go through.)
Khushi:Shubhamji ,plz change the song..
Shubham: Ji..
Arnav(confused): Y?
Khushi(whispers): Coz all r tests of love r over!
Arnav(tilts his head & whispers): Really?
Khushi nods.
Arnav(whispers): So.. did I pass or fail?
Khushi(whispers): U passed & so did I!Congratulations!
Arnav: Congratulations to u too! In this moment of happiness I would like to..
Arnav inches his face to kiss her cheek.
When Khushi looks at him,he withdraws.
Arnav(whispers): Sorry!
He shifts his gaze to the window.
Khushi moves closer to him & quickly kisses his cheek,surprising him.
Arnav stares at her in wonderment.
Khushi(whispers): We'll.. do the rest for later,hmm?
Arnav nods.
They dont do anything during the rest of the journey.
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Precap: Khushi: I have lots of things to tell u!
Arnav: Khushi plz!! We can talk later
! Didnt u hear what the dr said?U need rest!
Khushi: No... I want to talk right now!.. plz Arnavji! And I'll talking while lying down.That way I'll get rest & I'll b able to tell u everything!
Arnav: Khushi..
Khushi: U hav to agree,Arnavji! I'm not acting stubborn this time around! I'm requesting u with a plz.. (bats her eyelids) plz..
Arnav(sighs): Okay. Tell me.. What do u want to talk about?
Khushi: I want to talk to u about aunty,Nanheji & Amanji. Now u tell me- about whom should I speak first?
Kindly ignore typos & mistakes. Next update on Sunday.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.

Love the whispering conversation.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update loved it
but what is this Khushi want to talk about aunty aman and NK
she is really crazy after meeting with her husband she want to talk about others not about them
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update... Finally Khushi can show her pain freely knowing that her husband will look after her and everything else as well... I like her dependency on Arnav and Arnav treating her like a precious and delicate doll... Can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it love arnav-khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ,loved their private stolen moments . Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi smita...
Came across this ff by chance and feel in love with it... Have been reading it since then in one go (other than doing my daily chores)

You have given such cute names - Majnu Singh Raizada & Copycat Singh Raizada :)

Loved your 'transport game'... Wish we could have seen some of this enacted in the serial...

Your dialogues in punjabi are bang on!!! And so are your songs and shyaari...
Look forward to reading next update and would appreciate if you send me a pm, thanks
Poonam

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