KR OS: Sneak Out - A proposal - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Absolutely Rocking Concept..
Luvd Rey's proposal n the mentioned clauses..hahaha.. He's too smart to handle Kriya..
n poor Kriya..tried her best to trap Rey bt her plan totally back-fired! Haha.. Naughty Rey took the full advantage of the situation..
Whole part was WOW.. U r such an amazing writer..pls Keep writing OS frequently
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
AWESOME OS...sweet,naughty,cute ...i loved every bit of this OS ...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
-res-

-Unres-

Awesome OS Vaishu! 😊

You should write more OS's like this! 😃

Coming to the update, it was a different concept. 😛

Poor Rey...Kria ne itne saare restrictions lagaya hai. 😛

What a proposal! 😃

Kria Rey ko nahi chodegi...😃

Naughty ban rahi hai...😛

Last part was really adorable. 😊
Edited by damonelena - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

i hope at least yaha sab unres karde
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
wow i loved the way u wrote it!=D
i m loving kria n Rey more n more!
rofl the proposal ws too good yar!lovd it =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Hayee... Kya os hai...
Loved it loved it loved it
kha se start karu aur kha khatam..
Whole part was superb mind blowing amazing lovely hot nd romantic too...
Add as many adjectives u want.. Still it would be in less in front of this beautiful os..
I personally liked the concept..
Nd that letter is amaxing yaar...
Itne superb superb ideas aate kha se hai..
And that clause were awesome.. Poor kria 😆
Me kria ki jagah hoti toh ek min me accept kar deti... Akhir me prince charming ne joh socha hai..
Keep writing many many more..
I would loved to read it
nd i liked the title too...
As whole os was amazing but one line i love the most, Hope real me bhi kabhi aisa sunnu...
"Further Mrs.Reyaansh singhani a.k.a. Kria Ghai.. His finance nd would be wife... Hayeee"
Thanx for pm
Edited by GayatriJethani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Shenz it will get many more.. Bcoz i loved it nd awesome concept...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

Shenz it will get many more.. Bcoz i loved it nd awesome concept...


I know but Vaishu ko kaun samjhaye she was like... I am not getting good response n blaah blaah blaah
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Awsome OS...Loved it...Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome os!!!!
loved the romance...n d proposal was too gud😆 bechari Kria...
Kria ne itni mehnat ki par fayda Rey ka hi hua,romance bhi kar liya n proposal bhi accepy karva liya...
fab work n thanx for the pm😊

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