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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
plz
plz
plz update d nxt part soon!!!
itzz good
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
the imagination and all amazing update!! luvd it a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
omg luvd it
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
damn dream tha wo
aisa zulam kyun hum pe...
nice update...
loved it... Update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
part 12--
rey was furious n eager to know dt
"kal raat jo bhi hua kya wo sab ek sapna tha"

Taani was hurted...
she wanted to sort things out wid rey but kal raat jo bhi hua taani decided to jst let go everything...

T- rey shayad kabhi mujhe apna dost nahin manenge...unke dil me main shayad kabhi apni jagah nahin bana paungi..

sab comn room me gather hote hain...evry1 notices dt tani n shivam do not come together...
taani is avoiding him... but kyun pata nahin...

s- taani kya hua...is something wrong... tum thik to hona..??
t- im okk..bas mujhe ekele rehna hai...
s -but y babezz...hua kya hai...kal tumhare aur rey k beech kuch hau kya??

taani is stunned hearing dt shivam has noticed everything.. and wo nahin achahti ki kisi ko ye pata chale...

t-- mujhe kuch kaam hai...(n she goes)
shivam notices dt rey was continuosly looking at taani...

s-ye chal kya raha hai in dono ke beech...
dusre taraf...
r- taani mujhe avoid kyun kar rahi hai...
(as taani had not looked at rey once)... kuch to hua hai..mujhe pata lagana hi hoga...

every1 gets ready for d faceoff,,,,, battle begins btwn louins n other colg boys...
written by me pritha
Edited by piya.7565 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
part 13--

faceoff went well... and as usual..d3 team won...
every 1 was happy and celebrations were on air.. bonfire had been aranged n every1 gathers...
Rey searches for taani but she did not come...
R asks swayum-- taani nahin aai..??? tujhe pata hai kyun..
sw- mujhe kaise pata hoga...??? remember main bhi yum logon ke saath boys camp me huun..
r- oh ya sry..

rey eager to know asks to sharon-- wre's taani??
sh-- tumhe kyun itni concern hai??
r-- re nahin bas aasehi pucha tum sab yahan ho to wo nahin..
simmi-- rey ko to taani k elava kuch aur dikhta hi nahin..
r-- kya yaar tum log baat ko kahan se kahan le ja rahi ho..i jst asked geniunly...rehne do
sh-- hey rey... jst chill majak kar rahi thi...
taani nahin aa rahi... she has a head ache

rey (thinks)-- headache ya wo mujse milna hi nahin chahti... how can she avoid me like dis... mujhe pata lagana hi padega...

every1 is enjoing tabhi rey manages to skip bonfire n wo seedhe girls cottage ke andar chala jaata hai..

r-- re yaar ye taani ka room kaun sa hai..???

he sees some girls comming wo chup jaata hai..

gals- re ye taani ko kya hua l8 band karke baithi hai andhere me..

rey notices d rum wid closed l8s nd wo chupke se ghuss jata hai...

nd he sees a princess in a white dress khidki ke paas khadi hai... nd moonl8 was falling on her face making her lookexactly like a beauty in distress...

wait for the nxt part... more romance to come...? ? ? ? ?
written by me... luv pritha

Edited by piya.7565 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
part 14---

rey cudnt move his eyes...rey giving his cute wala smile... taani ko dekhe ja raha tha..
after adoring his princess for long,, he comes back to his senses ...
taani abhi bhi rey ke khayalon me khoi hui
wo taani ke paas jata hai... slowly wispers in her ears...

TAANI...
(awww so cute hain na!!!!)

Taani dar jati hai..turns and too her shock rey is standing dr...

T-- aap sach me yahan hai...??
R-- haan...
(luk luk hawa hawa)...

Taani realising rey sachme wahan hai...she screms...

T--AAP???? app yahan kya kar rahen hai...??ye girls cottage hai... aap pagal ho...kyun aaye hain yahan... agar kisi ko pata chal gaya to pata nahin kya hoga... pls jaaiye yahan se plss.jaaiye...

R--(noticing her nervousness...gives a wicked smile)... acha to tum nahin chahti hum dono saath rahe...???
t-- nahin aisa nahin hai... mere ye matlab nahin tha...
R-(interupting)--- to tum he chahti thi ki main tumhare paas aaon...
t--(shocked use nahin pata kaise react kare... wo najar hata keti hai...

R-- taani meri taraf dekho...

(taani rey ko ignore karke..tries to leave,,,but rey uska haath pakad leta hai...nd pulles her towards himself...)

t-- rey mera haath chodiye...
r-- nahin... pehle tum mere sawak ka jawab do...
t-- mere paas apke kisi sawal ka jawab nahin...
r-- main aj apne jawab liye bina nahin jaaonga...
t-- kya aj tak apne mere kisi sawal ka jawab diya hai...???
r-- f9 aj main tumhare har sawal ka jawab doonga...

hawa k wajah se taani's hair was constantly falling on her face...

rey age badta hai,,,to touch her face n baalon ko hata sake but taani goes back..
rey notice karta hai... wo bhi age badta hai ek step..
taani fir ek step peche..rey ek aur step aage..ultimately.. taani hits her back on d wall.. rey ek aur step aage leeta hai,,

? ? ?(awww dhak dhak!!!!dhak dhak!!!)

r--kya tum sachme nahin janna chahti mai kya shochta hun??
t--nahin
r--kya tum nahin chahti main tumhare paas aaun??
t--(dhak dhak) nahin
r-- kya mere hone na hone se tumhe farak nahin padta??
t--(dhak dhak) nahin
r-- kya mere chune se tumhe frak nahin padta??
(rey uska waist pakar kar pulls apni taraf...)
t-- (dhak dhak) n...h..hin...
r-- kya tumhari aankhen hamesha mujhe nahin dhondti??
t-- (dhak dhak) nahin
r-- kya tumhare dil mein aj bhi mere liye feelings nahin hai...
t--(dhak dhak...taani luks up ...)

both eyes meet...luk luk hawa hawa...

t-- to fir ab main jo karne wala hun usse tumhe koi farak nahin padega...

rey moved forward to kiss taani..❤️☺️she takes her steps back...rey pulls her aur paas...
kisses on her cheeks jst near her lips..❤️

nd dn goes takes back few steps.. taani is all frozen... she cannot breath...
after sometime she opens her eyes... sees rey.. den runs nd hugs rey ti8ly...☺️🤗🤗

rest to be continued,,,,,,,
written by me pritha...
Edited by piya.7565 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
ALL PARTS ARE VERY GOOD...
BUT PART 14 IS AWESOME...CUTE AND ROMENTIC...CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART.
UPDATE SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Update soon loved loved loved loved loved it :D
Awesome :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
All the parts were amazing u guys did a fab job. Plz continue

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