SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

they just cant do without each other

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Exceptional Writing n such a tangy story... Can't wait for the nxt update. I really wanna knw wht Arnie is upto??? Its really a cliffhanger... Plzzz update soon..

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

his lemon was in his car 😆. lovely update. falling in love is not easy for these two, is it? very very nice. thanks.

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bs_deeps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Originally posted by: go2sleep83
this is the first SS I have ever read coz my friend insisted, Thanks Deeps, It was fun to read 😊
TM great work 👍🏼 reminded me of old episodes👏

glad you liked it.. Farha's writing always brings back those magical moments

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

Originally posted by: Shariqa_here
Hey Farah... really sorry about the late edit...a big comment for the make up from my side😉

As you know, its my crazy life style and a crazy ipad to add to that😆

Anyway...it was lovely to read the chapter on Khushi's POV.

You chapters are so close to the show that it does not require much effort to visualise👍🏼

Although I read your FF for your beautiful style of writing (not the story i.e. it could be anything and I will still read it) I still prefer Arnav's POV to Khushi's.

And no I'm not all over Arnav or anything like that😆 It is simply because Khushi is like an open book and her actions dont startle anyone. However Arnav is a mystery man and his action and words do startle us because his logic id sometimes hard to understand or digest😆

So yes Arnav's POV is what interests me the most in ur story😉

Hi Shariqa!

Thank you so much for the thoughful comment! 🤗

I love writing from Arnav's POV ..somehow it comes to me more easily than Khushi's. I think you will agree that I write more from his POV always .. When I am writing from Khushi's, I have to give effort - and I guess that becomes evident in the writing style too. 😆 LOL .. so I guess writing from Arnav's is win-win for both of us .. 😆

I am not trying to build up a new story here really .. I am just trying to give them a chance in a parallel world.. where they would meet differently, fall in love differently .. and their story would end differently too .. so the characters & the events will be close to the show. 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: Parsha

how true to their character...n how khushi was tht.."KAUN ARNAV" 👏...blabbering on the phone..she is all tht...love ur understanding of ARSHI

And Nawaab

"You can practice it some other time. Not now & definitely not in my car..."

why is she in ur car boss..😆...OMG these two...its soo vinatge IPK..

waiting for ur update!!

Parsha!! 🤗

I eat, drink, sleep Arnav-Khushi .. 😆 .. there is almost nothing else but IPK in my life other than the things I have to do! So yes .. I think I do understand them to certain extent .. and thanks to you & all the lovely crooner ladies .. our hours of discussions must have helped! 😃

Vintage IPK .. I really miss it .. I never get bored no matter how many times I watch the old epis .. I am really here just relying on that magic and trying to recreate the story. 😊

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. Will update soon inshAllah. 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: go2sleep83
this is the first SS I have ever read coz my friend insisted, Thanks Deeps, It was fun to read 😊
TM great work 👍🏼 reminded me of old episodes👏

Thank you so much dear .. Deeps told me about you! I am really happy that you had fun reading! That's I all I wanted to deliver .. easy & fun read.. and a little reminiscing of the old school IPK .. 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: reallyhappy

i wud keep it fresh dt u promised 5 more chptrs..:P

ofcourse..she has to b back..

Laa ji n ASR ji wud b back lol

well distnce sumtyms brings ppl close..

may b..

Khushi wud shft 2 her dept.dt way...keepin distnce 4m Arnav..

n may b...d pickin up session wud cntinue..

welll thinkin too much..

wen's d update cumin?

LOL .. dont stress your brain .. I wont bring too many twists in this story. I would like to keep it simple. 😊

Update by Friday, if not Tomorrow, inshAllah 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: A...
Exceptional Writing n such a tangy story... Can't wait for the nxt update. I really wanna knw wht Arnie is upto??? Its really a cliffhanger... Plzzz update soon..

Hi There!

Was missing your comment... 😊 .. good to see you again! Arnie will be Arnie ..dont worry! 😛

Thanks for dropping by! 🤗