SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: chandana.s
Awesome update...

Wow,Arnav is Jealous... 😆

Is Khushi Hurt or Angery or Scared???!! It will be nice if she dont take a ride from him n he regret shouting at her... 😉

Continue sooon

😉👏

You will know what that was for once the next chapter is out .. 😆

What do you think Khushi's reaction would be? 😃

Thanks for regularly commenting on my updates ... you keep me inspired. 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: arnavbarun
devi maiyya in action and acting as cupid!!!!

arnav feeling at home with her and then jealous!!!

plz do pm me

I have accepted your buddy request already .. will surely PM you.

Thank you so much! 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: farheen75
A fab fab update... Oh how the mighty has fallen... ASR is jealous of his own employee oh how love do wonders to people... I really can't wait for the next part and I feel an apology of sort will be coming Khushi's way.

Hi Farheen!

Thank you so much for the sweet comment. I was thinking if there should be an apology or not .. you know how ASR is!!

Indeed love can do wonders .. he may or may not be in love with her already but something has definitely begun. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: lovedreams
a very different and nice concept...i like it :)

Thanks! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: fatima2603
Ahhh asr struggling with his feelings for Khushi. had to laugh when he ran away from la and became all cold when he was kissing la but thinking of Khushi!

LOL .. I too was kinda laughing when imagining and writing that .. 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: samspriyanka09
awesome update... just wanna see khushi's reaction in the next chapter

Hi Priyanka!

I hope you wont be disappointed with her reaction. 😃

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: peepli
Great update..

Arnav had no sense when he is angry..hope khushi stops going in his car, should teach hima lesson

LOL ..

😉👏 .. you will know what is these for once I update next! 😃

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Arnav said a lot i feel

Yeah! He always does when he is angry ..

Just think how he blasted her even after the kidnappting fiasco in the show!!! I have tried to keep the characters intact .. so it will take him much to learn to say less or at least talk sense when he is angry! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: iritz
Farha...

Super update !!! Loved it... Office romance... one of my favorites !!! Love ASR's anger... his jealousy... although he doesn't know it yet ! So much in character with the ASR we all fell in love with initially ! 😆

Ritz!!! 🤗

Thanks darling! Office Romance .. aha .. tell me about it. How much I love it ..!!! I, in fact, indulged myself into one .. and still having lunch together everyday for 6 years in a row. 😆

I have tried to keep the characters intact here as per the show .. I hope I can manage to keep them that way till the end. Just did not want to portray La as the b*tch she seemed like initially .. she was a good soul inside and so I will keep her balanced all the while in this story.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: chetanahooda

Oh! I am already biting my nails in anticipation .. bring it on soon!

I will try to update this time sooner .. have written a few words already. Lets see! 😛