How can I release you? Arhi OS Last Part - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome part 1...liked it...Continue soon...thanks for the PM...
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oh wow amazing dear...loved it n thnx 4da pm...
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Awesome! please continue and do pm me when you do!!
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Beautifully written..loved it..
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already read it. .its too good. .thanks for the pm . .
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Excellent OS. My heart beat doubled as I read your OS. The heartbreak of Khushi's missunderstanding of Arnav's words killed me. Khushi's emotions were plainly described so we as readers could feel her pain. Her conversation with her mother was difficult and I applaused Khushi for not blaming anyone for her circumstances or situation.
Arnav didn't hesitate for one second about his Khushi, I would love that to happen on series, but not happening. Arnav treated Garima with respect when asking about her relationship with his father. He was in control of himself. Now Khushi is headed out of town on a bus...
I am looking forward to the next update dear...
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Wow awesome continue soon thanks for the pm.

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hi
the up is really good and emotional too
by hearing the truth arnav became really shattered and he decided to broke the marriage and khsuhsi who went there to find him by hearing this gets totally heartbroken
she came to her house and asked her mom about this and her mom said that she was just trapped like her
khsushi believes her mom and decided to leave arnav
plz cont soon and pm me
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Wow emotional os really great...do continue soon...thanks for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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How can I release you? Part 2

thx a lot 4 d comments

Arnav sat inside his room.He cried.He was really depressed.
He remembered what happened between the last night.When he tried to go closer to her,he knew that Khushi may not like it.
A:Khushi...I...
K:I know...I trust you...

Arnav cried:Khushi thinks that i broke her trust.She thinks that I ditched her after using her.
But the truth is that I am longing for her.Khushi...I told you i can't live without you.Then why did you leave me and go?How will I live without you?
He cried:
tu hi re, tu hi re tere bina main kaise jiyu
aajaa re, aajaa re, yu he tadpa na tu mujhko
jaan re, jaan re, in saanso mein bas jaa tu
chaand re, chaand re, aajaa dil ki zameen pe tu

chahat hai agar aake mujhase mil jaa tu
yaa phir aaisa kar, dharti se mila de mujhko
tu he re, tu he re tere bina main kaise jiyu
aajaa re, aajaa re, yu he tadpa na tu mujhko...

Khushi's heart cried:aajaa re, aajaa re, yu he tadpa na tu mujhko
jaan re, jaan re, in saanso mein bas jaa tu
chaand re, chaand re, aajaa dil ki zameen pe tu...(Bombay)



Khushi got out of the bus.She did'nt know where to go.Suddenly somebody called her:Khushi...
She turned back.It was Mahima,her neighbour in Lucknow.
K:Mahima aunty!
M:I a meeting you after a long time.But Khushi...why are you in this dress?Where are you going?
Khushi burst into tears.She hugged Mahima.
M:What's the matter Khushi?
Khushi told her everything.
Mahima felt upset.
K:I don't want to go back.That can only give pain to others.
M:Don't worry.You can stay with me.Anyways I am alone after my children went abroad.
Khushi was relieved:Thanks a lot aunty...

After 2 months...
Khushi felt dizziness.She vomited.She was reminded of their sensuous night.She touched her stomach with shock.Tears rolled down her cheeks.
K:This is the symbol of our love Arnavji.My child will always remind me of you...our love.That's enough for me to live this life.

Months passed...

Arnav was driving the car.He saw a middle aged lady crying for help in the middle of the road.She was waving her hands.He took a sudden brake.She came near the window.
She:Please Sir...help me to take my daughter to the hospital.She is crying due to labour pain.No taxi is stopping.Please...
A:Ok...
Arnav went along with her to her house on the road side.
They entered the room.Arnav was shocked to see the lady who was crying out of labour pain.
A:Khushi!
He held her hand and shed tears.His tears fell on her hand.Khushi was stunned to see him.
They shared a very emotional eye lock which shared their pain with each other.They were reminded of their painful moments.

Kyun Khwabon Pe Tere Saaye Hai,
Dil Kyun Hai Tanha Mera,
Kyun Khamoshi Hai Zubaan pe meri,
Ashkon se keh paun na,
Kyun Dard Hai Itnaaa,
Tere Ishq Main,
Rabba Ve Rabba Ve
Rabba Ve Rabba ve.

Kyun Nazrain Teri Yun Anjaan Hain,
Ankhain hain meri bhi Nam ,
Kyun Pakar Bhi Tm Ko Khoya Hai,
Hum Kyun Na Ban Paye Hum,
Kyun Dard Hai Itnaaa,
Tere Ishq Main,
Rabba Ve Rabba Ve
Rabba Ve Rabba ve...



Arnav looked at her big belly.He was reminded of their passionate night.He felt guilty.
A:Khushi...you suffered this much because of me?Sorry...
He shed tears.
Her tears rolled down her cheeks:Arnavji!
A:Why did'nt you tell me when you became pregnant?You did'nt want me to see the symbol of our love?
Khushi cried.
She remembered Arnav telling Dadi that he hates her.
She thought:Arnavji hates me.These tears are out of his sympathy for me seeing my condition...knowing that I a pregnant with his baby.
She turned off her face suppressing her pain.
A:Khushi...don't worry...I am with you.We will never get separated.
Khushi looked at him unbelievingly.
Mahima became emotional seeing this.
Arnav carried Khushi in his arms and walked to the car.
He took her to the hospital.Khushi forgot her labour pain seeing her Arnavji with her.She doubted whether it was her dream.

After some time,the nurse came out of the labour room:Mr.Arnav Singh Raizada...your wife has delivered a baby boy.Congrats.
Arnav was really excited.He ran to the room.He took his baby in his arms and kissed him.
Khushi looked at them emotionally.
She murmered:Chota Laad Governor!
He heard it and giggled.She was embarrassed knowing that he heard what she said.
He kept the baby near her.She caressed her baby and placed affectionate kisses on him.
Mahima took the baby from them and placed him in the cradle as he fell asleep.She went out.
A:Khushi...why did you run away on our wedding day?You did'nt have faith in my love?How could you think that I can ditch you like that?Did you think that I can be that harsh with you?You were granted to me by fate.How can I release you that easily?
He held her hand:I won't let you go of these hands.
They looked at each other emotionally.Memories flashed through their minds.


(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VQ9XVh0ipmg
Please listen to this song)


Khushi felt that his wet eyes were telling her something:

Kismat se tum humko mile ho
Kaise chhodenge, yeh haath hum na chhodenge
Phir se banti taqdeeron ko
Armaanon ki zanjeeron ko
Jaanam ab na todenge
Kya kahoon kaise lagte hai dil pe zulfon ke saaye
Koi bhoola raahi jaise manzil paa jaaye
Ya koi dil toofaan ka maara
Dard ki laheron mein aawaara

Her heart was finally touching his heart:
Koi pyaara pyaar ke saaye paa jaaye...

A:Kismat se tum humko mile ho
Kaise chhodenge, yeh haath hum na chhodenge
Tukde dil ke hum tum milke
Phir se jodenge, yeh sheesha phir se jodenge

Khushi looked at him emotionally.
A:Yes Khushi...after our separation,our hearts broken into pieces.You and I shall rejoin the pieces of the heart.
Khushi's eyes were filled up with tears.She wanted to smile.


K:Phir se banti taqdeeron ko
Armaanon ki zanjeeron ko
Jaanam ab na todenge

He caressed her hair.
Khushi said in her mind:My love brought you back.You recognized my love.

K:Yun sharmaati yun ghabraati aise simti simtaayi
O mere baalam yunhi nahin main jaate jaate laut aayi hoon
Preet meri pehchaani tune
Meri kadr to jaani tune


A:After our meeting,our hearts have awakened, love has come to its senses.

Ab dil jaaga hosh mein chaahat ab aayi

Their eyes sang together giving emotional support to each other:

Kismat se tum humko mile ho
Kaise chhodenge, yeh haath hum na chhodenge...(Pukar)

Arnav cupped her face in his hands:I love you Khushi.
She looked at him with her teary eyes.

Her tear drop fell down.
K:I love you too Arnavji.
A:Last time you broke your promise and left me.Now promise me again that you will never leave me alone.Next time I won't forgive you.

Khushi was very emotional:I am sorry Arnavji.
She could'nt control her tears.

A:Just sorry is not enough.Promise me...
K:I will never leave you and go.
A:Promise me that you will never break your promise.
K:This time I will not break my promise.
He smiled.She rested her head on his shoulder.Arnav smiled holding her closer to him.She fell asleep as she was that tired.He placed her on the bed.
He caressed her innocent face.

A:Khushi...now nobody can separate us.

Arnav rang up Aman.He went out and talked.He smiled.

After 3 days...

A:Khushi...from the hospital,we are going straight to the temple.We will get married there.We will take saath pheras and complete our incomplete marriage. .Then we will register our marriage.
Khushi was stunned:Arnavji...
A:I have told Aman to make all arrangements.
K:But Arnavji...our family members...
A:I don't want our family members to be present in our wedding.
Khushi felt upset as she felt that Arnav does'nt want Garima to be there.
A:Don't misunderstand me Khushi.As you requested me I never hurt your mother.I never showed my anger to her.Infact i pity her as she was cheated by my father.
Khushi was relieved.She was very happy that Arnav understood that Garima was innocent.
A:Whenever our family members interfered in our marriage we got separated.We were happy living together as a married couple.But suddenly you were forced to go back by my family members giving a stupid excuse that we had'nt taken saat pheras.Again on our wedding day in the last moment dadi interfered and you went away from me.Again destiny brought us together.Now because of the family members I don't want the wedding to get postponed again.I can't take any risk.
He cupped her face in his hands:I lost you twice.Now again I can't think of losing you.
They shared a long emotional eye lock.

Arnav and Khushi entered into the institution of marriage in front of God while their baby who was in Mahima's arms witnessed his parents' wedding.


The end

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