SS:Arshi(last ch pg 33)SAAT PHERE (based on promo) - Page 5

your OS is totally awesome⭐️ pls PM me.

aww its so sad :( plz continue

I am the converationalist kind but seems a sad plot..u never know how it may shape up..please proceed..best of luck

This is actually something that seems plausible on the show!! I hope you continue soon!!

nice...age kya re😉

Wonderful! Pls retain her character strength!

very nice...
poor Khushi...
if Garima is not really at fault and was cheated by Arnav's father, then Daadi deserves some harsh treatment...
twas her son who cheated a woman and its her damaad who is cheating her poti...
so double the punishment she deserves...
cont soon...

Originally posted by: GodHelpUs

woh haath in haathon se

aaj chhoot raha hai

har guzarte lamhe mein

andar hi andar kuch toot raha hai,

pairo ki payal ,

jo chanakti thi kabhi

aaj bediyo se kadam

ko rok rahe hai.

goonjti shehnayiyo

ko khamosh kare koi

dastak dekar rooh par,

doli mein saare armaan

aaj laut rahe hai...

@Smitzy👍🏼

btw, try writing the same FF in hindi... in my head that shall have a greater impact...just saying😊

Originally posted by: smitzy

Oh my god! This was beautiful!! You wrote this yourself? 👏 Ya I had initially thought of writing this in hindi itself.. maybe the later chapters where Khushi speaks, I can do it in Hindi 😊 thanks again for these lovely words!