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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
your OS is totally awesome⭐️ pls PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
aww its so sad :( plz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am the converationalist kind but seems a sad plot..u never know how it may shape up..please proceed..best of luck
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is actually something that seems plausible on the show!! I hope you continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
nice...age kya re😉
waiting...something s pulling my heart :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Wonderful! Pls retain her character strength!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
very nice...
poor Khushi...
if Garima is not really at fault and was cheated by Arnav's father, then Daadi deserves some harsh treatment...
twas her son who cheated a woman and its her damaad who is cheating her poti...
so double the punishment she deserves...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woh haath in haathon se
aaj chhoot raha hai
har guzarte lamhe mein
andar hi andar kuch toot raha hai,
pairo ki payal ,
jo chanakti thi kabhi
aaj bediyo se kadam
ko rok rahe hai.
goonjti shehnayiyo
ko khamosh kare koi
dastak dekar rooh par,
doli mein saare armaan
aaj laut rahe hai...

@Smitzy👍🏼

btw, try writing the same FF in hindi... in my head that shall have a greater impact...just saying😊




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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: GodHelpUs

woh haath in haathon se
aaj chhoot raha hai
har guzarte lamhe mein
andar hi andar kuch toot raha hai,
pairo ki payal ,
jo chanakti thi kabhi
aaj bediyo se kadam
ko rok rahe hai.
goonjti shehnayiyo
ko khamosh kare koi
dastak dekar rooh par,
doli mein saare armaan
aaj laut rahe hai...

@Smitzy👍🏼

btw, try writing the same FF in hindi... in my head that shall have a greater impact...just saying😊


Oh my god! This was beautiful!! You wrote this yourself? 👏 Ya I had initially thought of writing this in hindi itself.. maybe the later chapters where Khushi speaks, I can do it in Hindi 😊 thanks again for these lovely words!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: smitzy


Oh my god! This was beautiful!! You wrote this yourself? 👏 Ya I had initially thought of writing this in hindi itself.. maybe the later chapters where Khushi speaks, I can do it in Hindi 😊 thanks again for these lovely words!


You are welcome ji...
Jee haan khud likha hai😳...aapke jitna khaas nahi hai, phir bhi kuch..ainvayi hi ..
Aapki likhi padh kar inspired hai, isliye aapko dedicate kiya hai
I read all your works👏, just that I barely get time to comment..hopefully this compensates for now..

to u and to all the lovely ppl...have a cheery weery week ahead🤗!
GHU

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