SS:Arshi(last ch pg 33)SAAT PHERE (based on promo)

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

part 3

loved ASR IN THIS PART

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

part 4

awesome

i hate cliffhangers

cont soon

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Oh No! A Cliffhanger...I hope Arnav find Khushi at the Mandir...Superb update.

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

*Switches on the PC, first thing after coming bak from college, to see if u have updated!😃
And u did, and that too yestrday itself!*😲
Disappointed that my comment is nt even close to the chapter!😔

Smitzzyyy🤗

You're on fire dude!!
Soo many updates in a day!😃
Yaad hai na ek aur FF hai jiski tujhe update deni hai!😆

Kya yaar...aise thodi na chapter ko end karte hain!😡
I loved it!❤️

ASR's panic, restlessness & love for her!
Khushi's love for him! and the fact that she understood why he didn't come and accepted it!

The hatred of 14 years or the love of 14 months❤️
Just love this line!

And, my god! The mighty ASR prayed!!😲

Loved the convo between Khushi and the poojari. It made me smile!
It was really sweet!😊

Eagerly waiting for the next part!
Arnav & Khushi!

Aaj hi karegi na??
Pleezz Update sooon!!😃

PS - And im telling you again! Mail this and the FF to the CV's!😉
Fine with the length of the comment!?😛

Just read ur reply to my previous comment!
Telepathy!😆 agree kuch tog ajeeb hai!😉
No, i wasn't the first to comment! well, cuz im not an owl!😆
Logon ko sona bhi hota hai!😛
What was the time when u put this update up?

And you also said ki u wanna finish this before tonights epi!!
Toh jaldi update kar!!

Edited by ipkkndfanforeva - 13 years ago

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

awesome, super-awesome

but y did u stop 😔

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GodHelpUs

@GodHelpUs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Thanks for the credit for my two bits...

I happened to catch the SBB segment today after 14 days of IPKKND fast.. despite my best efforts to not read/see/hear anything about the show, your SS reveals the ongoing plot. and yeah, I can run, I can hide, but there is no escaping the aura...koi na koi kambaqt mana karne pe bhi mooh khol hi deta hai😊

I still don't think I want to watch the show. Been there done that. Like all shows, the crescendo has to build up until the moment of saat phere.

Anyways, back to your FF. Good work. But I will hunt you down and kill you if you portray Khushi as any less the true fighter she is in your next segment. You turn her into a wailing, sacrificial door mat of a lamb and then, GodHelpYou from me Even Payal seem to have developed some nerves of steel this week and to hell with the script on air..In my head, the story you are writing, you better do justice to the characters initially etched for Khushi and Arnav. What the 4 Lions have forgotten is a mistake of epic proportions and unlike the show you needn't repeat them.

Of course, given the context, tears will be shed, hot words will fly around, harsh glances will be exchanged...I for one don't want anyone doing Khushi a favor here. Not even Naani...Khushi should script her own story in your version..

Good luck😊

Edited by GodHelpUs - 13 years ago

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babli0204

@babli0204

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

"Hey Devi Maiyya, Khushi ko apne paas hi rakhna. Main aa raha hun... "

Arnav was praying to Khushi's Devi Maiya!??!?!?!?! What the...?!?!?!?!??!?

OHHH...Beautiful part!!! the poojari is so nice!!!!

THANKS for the PM dear!!!

Edited by babli0204 - 13 years ago

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minnuma

@minnuma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

loving it...please continue soon- u write so well that i can picture both of them in my mind and feel for what they are going through...looking forward to the next update

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@Tish_Ani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Hmm toh dude...it ws awesum
I red bod 3 n 4
Yah u again left it on d cliffhanger...😔!

Yah, hv 2 say 4's length ws gud n ws longer compared 2 oders...