ArHi: The Luthier's Tale [NextUpd: 14/4| NotePg39] - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
i loved this update!!
loved the way the music relates to the pent up emotions of a person whether playing or listening.
and thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Music...connects souls on a different level...I am hooked...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
I've been in a sad state of mind all day today and now reading your words have just accentuated those feelings. Music, the one thing which can make you feel happy but at the same time can be heart wrenching and you have expressed it so brilliantly. I was on the verge of tears (which happens very rarely) so you know how special this chapter was.

Keep up the good work Amal.

cheers!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: V323

RES

Loved it. A little tight on time at the moment... but It was an interesting read!
PM me please?
-V


Thanks V. Sure. <3

Originally posted by: GayuArnav

Very interesting Start!

Waiting for the next update! :)


Thank You very much. Will put it as soon as I can.


Thanks loads. <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
awesome update!! loved how you wrote about arnav's pain
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
part 2
nice...
cont soon dear...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: dumas

wow that was intriguing they way he was feeling his emotion he go carried away but her playing not seeing her face but feeling her emotions loved how you describe his emotion beautifully thanks for the pm


Thanks a lot for dropping in. Means so much to me. Your welcome :)

Originally posted by: raomedhz

i really liked this...your language is very good!!😃

Loved the way you portrayed his pain in this update!!
And his realization that she must have also been in pain...while he felt the same...but her music helped him escape and relive happiness for however little time that he could...lovely!
Thank you for the pm!!🤗


Thanks a lot dii. :) I am glad to hear that. Music does things to you. So I guess, that's her power over him. Your most welcome :)

Originally posted by: shagun05

i loved this update!!

loved the way the music relates to the pent up emotions of a person whether playing or listening.
and thanks for the PM dear.


It always does :) Your most welcome and thank you for dropping in.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Music...connects souls on a different level...I am hooked...


It definitely does :) Thank you dii for dropping in.

Originally posted by: smitzy

I've been in a sad state of mind all day today and now reading your words have just accentuated those feelings. Music, the one thing which can make you feel happy but at the same time can be heart wrenching and you have expressed it so brilliantly. I was on the verge of tears (which happens very rarely) so you know how special this chapter was.


Keep up the good work Amal.

cheers!


Your comment does things to me, dii. I feel...content... because you are feeling the exact same as I felt while I wrote. Thank you. Music does things to people and I am glad I have been able to reach a minute part to you. Thanks a lot :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Superb
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
I am totally smitten.
TOTALLY.

I can imagine how energy draining it is because that is one hell of a powerful play of words.


Loving it so far
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