IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

amazing piece. i'm big fan of ur perfection and now this... wow

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nimra21

@nimra21

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Oh I love this so much! Arnav's desperation is reminding me of "kyun dard hai itna tere ishq main." He needs something to hold on to, to survive. Well done! This is such a moving tale. And loved your attention to detail. The Singh's story was very well etched out. :)

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ashred12

@ashred12

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

if he is so sure, y dont he try dna test ?!

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

lovely story...arnav's feelings were described so well...

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

This is a continuation of Apshagun right? You made it pretty clear in that OS that both Khushi and her baby did not make it. I feel nothing but pity for Arnav in this story..He is in his own personal hell, and he is so desperate for salvation that now he is refusing to see the truth.

Brilliantly written as always Navin.

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amv63

@amv63

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Navin,

I'm crying here, girl. This story is heartbreakingly beautiful.

Arnav's pain, his utter despair and his desperate need to believe little Khushi is his child with Khushi...it's so very sad. His terrible suffering suggests he was completely unaware of what Khushi had gone through all alone. I like to think that he loved her too much to have deliberately hurt her all over again.

And somehow something doesn't sound right about Amrita's pregnancy and little Khushi's birth in Dr Bose's exclusive clinic. I'm more inclined to agree with him.

Hope to keep hearing from you regarding this and your other stories.

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

I am currenlty in transit so will read this story once i have settled down...but would love to receive PMs...sorry for any inconvience😉

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Ok...I love you for sending me the link to this SS or I would have missed out on a lovely story!!

The suspense was killing me until the third update!!! Khushi's dead??? Omg!!!!😭

Poor Arnav...he was hanging on to the idea that Khushi might have just left him a child!!! That was painful...you really portray emotions really well!!!!

Coming to the latest update...i loved the part where Aman got angry! Despite his loyalty to Arnav...his frustration at Arnav's incessant attempts to find some proof that Khushi was his daughter was realistically written!!

I loved little Khushi!! This story is really tugging on my heart-strings!!

And I'm saying it again...thank you for sending me the link to this!!🤗

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Wth!!

Arnav has done wayy too much digging...for the proofs to be wrong!
They've covered every little detail to know who the little girl is!

I understand his need to go through everthing...cuz he wants to just wants a little part of Khushi in his life!

Things are getting wayy too interesting!
Wonder whats gonna happen next!?

Update soon!😃