FF: ASR Junior's Secret Diary Part 20 *LAST* Up - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
really ..did u know how much i enjoyed while reading this update😊😆
manufactured from posh hospital 👏🤣
downloaded through internet🤣
but sad thing this was the last update😔😭
at the beginning i read one or two parts..liked ashar n asmara 😊
later loved ❤️❤️
especially ashar❤️❤️❤️
awesome dear👏🤗
i hope u ll come with new os 's with ashar n asmara once again😉

cheers👍🏼🥳
Edited by thulasi_arshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fari that was beyond awesome!!!😊
(Lavanya Aunty came over for a visit with You-Know-Who! And by that I mean Sarah, not Lord Voldemort! ) 😆 For Real, I was like "Voldemort?" after reading You-know-who! 😆
(He is sooo his Anjali Bua's nephew!) 🤣
(Look at Manorma Maami for example. Such a big manufacturing mistake.)
Now thats true! 😆
(Can you believe that? Dad found my writing illegible! Like his own writing is very good!) 😆 (There are lot more lines which cracked me up 🤣 No! Actually, The whole update 😆)
Awww Fari! I loved it , just loved it! Laughed at every freakin line! 😆 I am surely gonna miss the Happenings in RM *Sob Sob* 😭(From Asher's POV ) 😆 Awww Asher is the cutest thing! 😳
Now i am gonna read this FF from the very first chapter! Yea! 😛
Love you Fari for giving us ASR junior's Secret diary! 🤗
Edited by Adorable.SARUN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awh. It ended. On a happy note. LOVED the entire thing. My first and the best FF on here 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww this is really the last update?????? 😭

But I must say you have created a character which is almost equally popular and adorable as the ASR himself and for some like me even more adorable than ASR 😆

Everytime I enjoyed readig it so much and I used to instantly get transfferred to a land of child or should I say I just used to become a child and enjoyed reading every bit of it 😊 and for it all the credit goes to you because you have portrayed the character of the child so wonderfully 😊

This FF is surely your baby but trust me many of the readers have adopted it as well

Now I think I might be gettting a bit over emotional and you must be getting bored so I'll come to the update

This was EPIC update ... Each and every line made me laugh ... If I am going to tell you where I laughed I would have to quote your whole update ... Brilliant job 👏

First you cracked me up with your 'Abba Ve, O Abba Ve'.🤣

And then "You know who" 🤣 ... Let me tell you I am a HP freak so I really thought of Voldemort as well but as you had already mentioned La so I knew that he was talking about Sarah


The whole description of Sarah, Ashar's acidity and not to forget the Babby Ve song was just Awesome 😆 ... And God save Asmer from Ashar 😆

Asher, Anser and Asmara's convo was also too good and he made fool of Anser and Asmara😆... typical big bro 😆

And you have ended it with an awesome idea that Khushi is going to keep the diary now ... And I really felt sad when I read the line

And so, here ends the secret diary of Ashar Singh Raizada.



At the end I would like to request you that please keep on bringing Ashar in your other OSs as you had done recently in Perfect Sundays
Edited by SSB28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
great end dear..will miss this SS :-(
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an outstanding update!:D
Poor anser:p
I'm gonna miss this ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
ahh! so another bites the dust eh?

i can't believe ansar's memories are short lived! :( this was a great story... loved it!!! i'll miss it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww... You ended it? Why? It was so good? 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was vintage ASR version 2 ( I would have preferred to go with ASR Reloaded) but I am so crazy about ASR that I decided to let go of it)
I loved so many elements in this post
Rabbe Ve -to Abba Ve to Baby Ve
Inherited acidity problem
Manorama Mami being a manufacturing mistake, reminded me of technical kharabi in Arnav
Driving Baby Ferrari to celebrate.
Daddio!
"inherit and disinherit me according to their whims" --oh what dramatic choice of phrase
"Anjali Bua eat up her own kids?' - priceless
Thanks for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i luvd it..luvd it...

baby ve...aww...dat was so cute..


nd baby talks...wer does one get baby from???


but it ended...😭


bt awesume..

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