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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 4

The next day reyam started their Mission Krisha ko Hatke tareeko Se Manao .

Jeene Laga Hoon
Pehle Se Zyada

The two girls were walking in the corridor when they heard swayam's voice. Who came to Sharon.

Pehle Se Zyada
Tumpe Marne Laga

Rey came to kria singing these lines , kria blushed a little.

(Tune)

Rey took kria to the fire escape and swayam took Sharon to the abandon staircase . Krisha went to a corner and saw the whole place decorated . (If i am describing kr even ss have the same scene and vice versa)

Main Mera Dil
Aur Tum Ho Yahan

Rey came to kria , and gave her a rose . Kria blushed looking away.

Phir Kyun Ho
Palkein Jhukayein Wahan

Swayam held sharon's chin slowly and made her look at him , singing these lines , while Sharon was blushing .

Tum Sa Haseen
Pehle Dekha Nahin

A banner of kria came down , on it was written "I love you kria!" . Rey pretended as if drooling over it.

Tum Isse Pehle The
Jaane Kahan

Swayam went behind Sharon who was looking at the banner in awe and he whispered these lines in her ears . She blushed . And moved two steps above.

Jeene Laga Hoon
Pehle Se Zyada
Pehle Se Zyada
Tumpe Marne Laga

Reyam caught Krisha's hand and turned the girls , who came down , but slipped the guys caught them and pinned the hair back . (They are singing the song remember :P)

(Tune)

The girls were blushing , while the guys still holding them , took out a diamond pendant (Sharon) and a diamond bracelet (kria) . The girls looked at the guys in awe and the guys mouthed an I LOVE YOU . The girls blush and go.

Rehte Ho Aa Ke Jo
Tum Paas Mere
Tham Jaye Pal Yeh Wahin
Bass Main Yeh Sochun

Krisha came to their loves and hugged them . Reyam hug the girls back and they were dancing slowly . Everything around them had stopped and they were just in each other's arms . When suddenly the guy's felt a push and they came out of their dream land , they saw their respective girl's falling as they had clashed with them , and caught their hands . (imagine how rey caught kria near the abandon staircase).

Sochun Main Tham Jaye Pal Yeh
Paas Mere Jab Ho Tum

Kria sang these lines , dancing in her room with a picture of rey in her hand . When she clashed with rey .

Sochun Main Tham Jaye Pal Yeh
Paas Mere Jab Ho Tum

Swayam forwards his hand , and Sharon singing these lines danced with him , when she realised she was dancing with a cushion . And laughed.

Chalti Hai Saansein
Pehle Se Zyada

Rey removed the blind fold and kria saw a video of their dancing , (Inn lamhon ke daaman mein – kriyaansh) (Haye rama – swaron) . Rey twirled her singing the lines , The whole place was filled with heart shaped balloons.


Pehle Se Zyada
Dil Theharne Laga

Sharon was facing him , he took her hand and kept it on his chest . Sharon looked at him, she felt his heartbeats . And her cheeks were completely flushed.

(Tune)

Reyam moved forward , and pecked krisha's cheek . They pushed the guys away and ran blushing , While the guys smirked with a small smile on their lips.And danced in joy , but fell down hurting their hands.

Tanhaiyon Mein Tujhe Dhoondhe Mera Dil

Rey looked around seeing no one got up , but someone held his other hand.


Har Pal Yeh Tujhko Hi Soche Bhala Kyun

Swayam turned and did not find anyone , he pouts and turned to leave.

Tanhai Mein Dhoondhe Tujhe Dil
Har Pal Tujhko Soche

(For kr only) Kria came to rey and took his hand singing these lines she sprayed on it and pecked his forehead.

Tanhai Mein Dhoondhe Tujhe Dil
Har Pal Tujhko Soche

(For ss only) Sharon came to swayam , she was singing these lines and kissed his hand . And pouted while singing the last part.

Milne Lage Dil Pehle Se Zyada
Pehle Se Zyada Ishq Hone Laga

Reyam led their lady loves to the dinner place and made them sit ,and kneeled down , they gave them a teddy (Sharon) heart (kria) . And taking krisha's hand pressed it , a voice of them came saying I Love You . Krisha blush and hug them

(Tune)

They dance passionately lost in each other's love.

Kria entered the house , and slowly went to her room , she lied down blushing about her love . Same was with Sharon . She received a call it was kria.

"Hey shar!"

"Hi kria!"

"Kaisi rahi date?"

"Tu bol!"

"Magical!"

The two said together and laughed .

Reyam met at their favourite place.

"Finally maan gayi voh!"

They laugh .

"Swayam , humne unn dono ke hate to love you ko."

"Love to love you mein badal hi dia!"

They smiled .

Flashback over .

Reyam smiled knowing what they both were thinking.

Rey entered his house , a small 2 year old girl came running to him.

"Daddy!"

Rey picked the girl ,

"Yes angel?"

"Sanju is very angry on you! You didn't bring a gift for her!"

She pouts.

"How can daddy forget brining a gift for his sanjana!"

He gave her a Barbie doll house and three new Barbie , she smiled in joy and ran to her room . Kria came out . She hugged him.

"Please don't leave me again! I hate being alone!"

"I am so sorry baatcutter! Ab na toh mein tumhe chodunga na iss champ ko!"

Caressing her bump , kria blushed

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Swayam entered his house , and saw Sharon sleeping on the couch with their two year old son rohan , sleeping cuddled to her . But rohan woke with the noise and looked at swayam.

"Dad!"

Sharon opened her eyes , and smiled at him . Swayam picked rohan up.

"Missed your dad?"

"Yes!"

"Wanna know what dad bought for you?"

"Yesh!"

Swayam took out a shoe for him , with a small watch for his tiny miny hands . Rohan smiled in joy and ran away.

"Welcome back swayam!"

Swayam smiled , and pulled Sharon to him pecking her forehead he said.

"I missed you!"

"I missed you too swayam!:

She hugged him

"Sharon?"

"Yes?"

"I love you!"

"I love you too!"

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Sanjana and rohan smiled , as their friends clapped.

"How lucky! Tum dono ke parents ki itni khatti meethi love story hain!"

They smiled . And told their friends togetehr

"They hated to love each other , but destiny changed that hate into love , and even after so many years of marriage they were and will always be together . Cause Kriyaansh and Swaron are meant to be!"

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Here ends this story , i hope you liked this update.

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res plzzz Done
ye kya end story very nycly written 👏👏👏👏
or baki ki update kaha hai mujh pm nhi kiya kyaaa ??🥱
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ending..
Hate to luv u turned into love to luv u..
N sanjana n rohan so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
my my superb and fabulous ending... u deserve this 👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ending... hate ko kaise love mem badal diya...thanks 4 the pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Perfect end... 👍🏼
Awesum update... 👏

Thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!!;)
Loved ittt;);)
And my favorite song on my favorite couples!!!;)
Niceee:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update...
Luvd d end...
Thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super amazing update...
Loved the way u showed Reyam manoufying Krisha...
Love the song...
Amazing ending!!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
loved it
wow!!!!
reyam mana-oing KRISHA
was the best
aww!!!! \\the song was nice
i loved it

ending to superb thi
fab job 👏👏

thank you for the pm

Edited by spongy - 12 years ago

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