Hate dt i luv u...KR n SS SS Pt 4 Pg 33

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I know pagal samajh rahe hoge mujhe tum sab...

Sach bataun toh mein khudko paagal samajh rahi hun...exams sar par hain and ek naya ff...waise yeh waala mom ghar par nahi thi issliye laptop nikalkar likh dia...nahi toh mom ne toh mera laptop ban kar dia hain!!!..

Yeh idea mere dimaag mein mere first ff se pehle se chal raha tha...so m posting it now...

Hope u all lyk it...and promise saare ff ke updates 4th october ya 5th october ko milenge...so heres the prologue...

~~PROLOGUE~~

I reached the college...knwoing i had to plaster a fake smile on my face...when i was crushed inside...i sat with the group...what were they doing?????...nothing just hurting me more...making me feel guilty...i felt a hand on my shoulder,...i so wished that when i turn i find her...and she tells me that SHE IS FINE...i so wished...but i turned and saw sharon...i gave her a sad smile...
Sharon-Are you okay??????...your not looking well...
Me-M okay sharon...chill...you guys continue...
Simmi-Stop thinking about that good for nothing girl...you know because of your this stupid nature you are hurting SHARON...
I look at sharon...
Me-Well to me no one is as important as her...not even sharon...
Rey-Why dude??...who is she to you???...
Me-My life!!!!...
I was damm angry on them...i saw their shocked faces...
Me-Haan...i love her more than sharon!!!...i cant live without her...she is my life and will always be...no one not even sharon can take her place in my heart...and i hope that it never happens...i should have stopped her that day...you dont even know what pain and guilt m i going thru...all you guys know is that she hurted you all...i quit...find a new dancer for your team...m leaving st.louis!!!...
I went away...not at all intrested to see their shocked faces...


Kaisa tha????...confused?????...

P.S- Iss ff ke update only after my exams finish...

P.P.S-For pms add me in ur buddy list!!...


Prologue-Scroll up..
Part 1-Pg 7
Part 2-Pg 20
Part 3-Pg 27
Part 4-Pg 33 (Last Part)
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Dreamer3003 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woww new ff:):)
awesome prologue:):)
But who s leaving!!?
Update soon pls:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept
do continue
n thanx fr the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice concept..
i think swayam is leaving jst a guess..
plz add me to your pm list..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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do cntinue...

awsumm bt cnfusing ...

clear d cnfusn asap...

may b that guy iis swayam...

thanxx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So kriya has already left!!
N rey is leaving too...
Wait a min.. Rey is leaving o swayam.. Confusion!
But y swayam wud leave bt kriya is his bestfriend..
70% chances toh rey k e h.. Hehe
Btw interestin prologue..
Waitin fr d first part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept bt confusing hai ...
updte soon
was that frm swayum's POV????

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Posted: 13 years ago
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How many FFs are u planning to start 😆...
Well it was Amazing 👏...
I think that person was Swayam (Just a wild thought) 😉...
Will be waiting for your update...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey osm prolouge ... Jaldi se update karo na ... Nd tanx fr the pm ... Do pm me the next part ..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome prologue...
i guess it is swayum...
thnx for pm...
plz update soon...

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