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s_rh

@s_rh

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#401

great update ... I love ur style of story - telling using flashbacks ... thanks for the pm and super update as usual ...

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Aliya_hzsn

@Aliya_hzsn

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Loved the flashback convo of anjali and arnav!!

Arnav so deserves the hatred from anjali...itll take loadz of years to heal!!!

Khushi seeking solace in anjali's arms..sounded beautiful and emotional too!

The sieved curtain fell, finally and I now stand at the threshold, my back to the darkness.

finally khushi seeems to be ready to face the light and walk towards it!!!

Edited by Aliya_hzsn - 13 years ago

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#403

it was awesome as always.
so anjali is not as delusional as the show portrays her.
im glad to know this. 😆
and it keeps getting interesting, so keep updating !

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#404

Awesome update Zehra!!!

I love Anjali in this story..she's quite sensible 😆

Loved it! =)

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indeedisa

@indeedisa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Khushi seems so broken. It's so sad.
And at last Arnav has admitted in words what atrocities he did to Khushi. And the second to last paragraph just made me take a sigh of relief.
I do wonder what's in that box though.
Please please update soon. I check this story every day at least twice!!
Lots of Love
Celiza xox

Edited by indeedisa - 13 years ago

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dorindakate

@dorindakate

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Thanks for the pm...I had been waiting anxiously for the update...

One of the few things that I like about Arnav is that once he sees that he is or has done wrong he faces up to it, to the people who are or will be affected most, admits what he has done, and seeks to rectify it...

So I am having SOME compassion for Arnav...he has allowed his negative emotions to cloud his judgement and he truly has been destroyed...Not only had he become worse than his father, but he has lost his sister and second mother in the process...

I'm less concerned with Arnav's ability to cope with what he's done than Khushi's recovery...for SHE is the innocent injured party...I'm relieved that at last, through Anjali's help, she feels that the blackness of the past is behind her and that she can once again enter the light...

Just love your Anjali...her reaction to the verification of Shyam's unfaithfulness, her horror and repulsion of Arnav's actions, her rejection of him as chotey, her insistence in knowing where Khushi is...and then being the warm comforting and assuring touch and voice for Khushi...

I'd say the chapter is perfect.

Patiently waiting to find out what the black bag contains...

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MithilaTorr

@MithilaTorr

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#407

I don't think any amount of repentance should give Khushi back to Arnav! Rape is a sin which should not be forgiven! But then I know ,ASR is irresistable, but if it brings back Khushi , then let her have him.

As usual awesome update! thanks😃

Edited by Torr - 13 years ago