Rules Of Attraction#3 Chapter 37 02/10 Pg73 NEW!

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

gosh...how am i supposed to react to this chappy...

it is too sensitive to be put into words...words seem to fall short ...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

I really feel after this that she will die. I was hoping she would make it, please end the torture soon.

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shr1234

@shr1234

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

You write just impossibly fabulous. This just leaves an aching heart but like a masochist, I find this ache beautiful. I find Khushi, Arnav, weakened, helpless, on the verge of the inevitable defeat, but there's this beauty, I can't tell you what I find in it. It's like reading poetry. I don't have words for it. Amazing!

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

That was earth shatteringly beautiful. So sad that I want to cry just like Khushi is doing and Arnav wants to ...yet the whole relationship and their love just makes me go speechless with wonder.

Please please please don't let this love down...ever since I discovered this story, I have had this hope that she will be okay because she just has to beat this dreadful disease...she has to fight it and win...for her Arnav.

Let them be okay...it is a heartfelt wish...

The part about her comforting her and not letting her go even though she is almost senselessly asking him to leave her alone has to be the best Arnav and Khushi moment yet out of many more treasured ones but this was caring and loving ultimate moment.

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Sona, every update of this FF leaves me in tears - beautiful update

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Heartbreaking update.. Feeling bad for Khushi but she is being strong.. And more importantly Arnav is being stronger for her.. They will overcome this, together...

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Oh God. I'm blinking back tears and I feel choked. Just read the last four updates together. I had somehow lost track of this story! Never realized when the next update came.

It is so beautiful and heart-rending. There are moments when the despair hits you so hard, you can do nothing but pray silently for the ones who have actually gone through these moments, fighting this disease. It's just so well described, you can feel their helplessness, and feel so helpless yourself. You can only think, "No, no, oh no," and yet you cannot help but keep reading. Such a way with words. And the songs, wonderfully chosen. some of my favorite artistes.

There is no word that I can think of to even begin describing just how amazing you are as a writer. And how absolutely poignant this story is. I bow to you.

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

i am speechless and heartbroken at the same time...
no words could justify what i've just read and what i felt reading the update... i cried and still i am in tears...
the beauty and sorrow of the chapter was beyond perfection..
i just wish every patient who are suffering from terminal illness and going through these heartbreaking phases or even worse- have someone like Arnav around them to make them realize every waking moment how much they are loved.. even 30% of him would do...

thank you for this brilliantly written story...