Rules Of Attraction#3 Chapter 37 02/10 Pg73 NEW!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

That was real emotional hope that the surgery goes well

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#432

every cloud has a silver lining. that is what i am grasping at. brought a lump to my throat. you have really captured the emotions of all concerned

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

It was just so sad but equally beautiful... Loved it.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

The love is so beautifully shown. I specially feel Arnav's heartfelt declaration to Shashi that he is just trying to extend his life, his happiness by doing everything in his power to extend he life breath.

It is painful to watch them via this story and yet it would be impossible to tear my gaze away from the story that is unfolding.

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Kyon, a small word just like why, but has the largest capacity of an unknown answer, we question our unhappiness and ill health and never find an answer, yet when we are happy or healthy do we ask the same question, why?

To see a loved one suffer is hard (esp when its Arnav) but the one who is suffering, suffers twice over, the illness and the heartbreak of seeing their loved ones suffer with them and for them.. come what may I know you will not disappoint us but there will be tears no matter what... this story really is close to my heart after watching my father bravely fight cancer, he wanted to see his grand kids grow up but lost his battle 2 years ago...

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

How do you write about all this? I seriously cherish everything that I have been blessed with after reading your updates, making sure to say thank you to Allah for what I have. Life is so precious, we get upset about tiny things when someone is fighting for their life. It just puts everything in perspective. I am in awe at how well you are describing what they are going through, from his point of view watching his life slowly going away, hoping for another day, more hours, trying to fulfill all her wishes and trying to hold on for more. From her point of view of fighting not just for her life but for him, being strong for him so he can go through this, trying to be happy when you don't know how long you have, trying to be brave so your body cane subjected to more poison to kill the disease that is not going away. From the point of view of her parents as which parents can imagine their children passing away before them? You are not giving too much hope but the eternal optimist in me is praying for them even if this is fiction, praying for a happy ending . . . But do not let us sway your storyline please as you are depicting something that is truly inspiring and something that is very real. This is asli duniya and you are doing a brilliant job at making us connect with it even if most come to FFs to escape the asli duniya.

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Each one is saying goodbye to their loved one...

This update was heart wrenching.

Khushi saying good bye to her mother and father. She became that little girl who followed her mum around the kitchen, reliving the happy times while her mum did what mum's do best. making your child's favourite food...Thats what we mums do...

Shashi's helplessness was heart breaking but what caved me in was Arnav trying to memorize every little mole and mark and every detail about Khushi. That was drop-dead painful. He will be there long after she is gone ...a pain that the living need to live with ...unbearable and unsurmountable.

Khushi wanting to live and telling Arnav what she feels when she thinks he is asleep was beautiful.

Once again a my heart felt as though someon was squeezing it hard...and I was in severe pain. At times I wonder what I'm doing by reading this FF I must have been a masochist in my previous life.

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starsarun

@starsarun

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Update was beautiful. They both Love each other imensely. If Arnav have fear to loose Khushi then Khushi have to be away from Arnav. That scene was epic when Arnav told her that He is Angry.. The talks of Shashi and Arnav were touchy. For this goes...