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Laila

@Edella17

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

This is good...I didnt just like it, I loved it...Can we ask for another part 😉

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

The End.
Seriously?!?!
You The Ended this so quickly!!!
Can you like, maybe turn this into a two shot or somfin'?
'Cause this is amazing!!!
Anyway, Vas Happenin'!!!!
I litterelly loved this story, it held so much depth, and I think you need to continue!!!!
Loved how you described Arnavs pain...
Awesome one shot and thanks for the pm :)

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NothingLasts

@NothingLasts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

he deserved it. but you made Khushi ooc. i did not like that.

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awwe this was really sad 😭 But I like your writing style dear ! Thank you so much for the PM 🤗

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Badtameeez

@Badtameeez

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Now that was something different; I could actually imagine Khushi like this... She sounded more like a speaking corpse to me. I loved how Arnav's realization was interconnected with the dream of his mother! That was beautiful!!👏

Edited by Barun.Obsessed - 12 years ago

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arshifan2012

@arshifan2012

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

you made me cry sarah!!!!!

lovely piece of writing here!!!!!! thnx for the pm!!!!!!

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Kay Dee

@PollyTrolly

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

THIS made me cry !! :'(

I hope this never happens. Arnav HAS to believe her this time.
Wonderfully written as always !

P.S: I am no more regular on IF. Busy in college. But I keep reading the FFs on your blog and reply there. Thanks for all the PMs ! Mwaah.

Keep writing. <3