D3:HORROR ON THE MEADOW... - Page 14

Originally posted by: -shenz-

firstly thanks for the dedication...


the update was short yet amazing..


Sharon faints coz of that Cheevam... mar gaya phir bhi shanti se jeene nahi deta...




ab toh swayam bhi ro raha hai...


but yahan toh Swayam aa gaya.. I was expecting Kria's soul to appear n save Shar... anyways... I loved it...

I thought to do dat...but yar it would have been predictable!

Superb dea... Love d intimacy of SwaRon... U potrait dem beutifully dea...

PART 7

Hey guys'hows u all? I was planning to update this FF frm when but kya karoon aj hi time mila.k now this update is dedicated to my dear Mellisa'Luv u baby'and no more bak bak now'plz scroll down for update (No recap)

The doctor who was treating Sharon comes out.

Dr.:Aap sab me se Swayam kaun hai?

Swayam: Dr. Swayam mein hoon..kyun kya hua?

Dr.:Patient aap se milna jahta hai

Swayam:ji Dr. mein abhi jata hoon.

Rey: Swayam 'tu Sharon se milke aa'tab tak mein bill details dekhta hoon.

Swayam:haan thik hai ja.

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Swayam enters the room

(He goes near Sharon and sits beside her)(He gently places his palm on Sharon's forehead'this awakes Sharon)

Sharon: Swayam'

(she tries to get up'He helps her)

Swayam: (Cupping Sharon's face) I'm sorry Sharon'I was such a bad bf'I couldn't take care of u'I hate myself for having hurt u'how cud I'how dare I..(tears start forming in his eyes)

Sharon: Enough...have u lost it? This is not bcoz of u..its all bcoz of that creep Cheevam'and u dare blame urself and evenif u hate urself I don't care..bcoz I luv u !

Swayam: (Giggles at her reaction) Sharon..ur such a sweetheart..and chalo ab ghar'and ya..ur dad called he said that he's leaving for Dubai today'he told me and Taani to shift to ur place to take care of u'

Sharon: WOW! That's gr8'I can't belive it..and waise u can sleep in my room haan (winking)

Swayam: acha bachu..chal ab

(Helps her get down and they go out to find the whole college dark and silent)

The college was looking as if it was a haunted house. Sharon caught Swayam's arm'.he looked at her face and gave her a smile filled with concern. She smiled back at this.

Suddenly there was a thunder and followed by an evil laughter'

Shivam: Ha Ha ha!

Swaron: Tum!

Shivam: subah toh is Swayam ke karan Sharon I couldn't make u mine but today'no one can stop me.

Swayam: himat hai toh pas ake dikha (Sharon hides behind him)

Shivam uses his wand and sprinkles some water on Swayam'dats it Swayam was taken aback he fell on the ground with a thud

Swayam: Aaa

Sharon: Swayam !

Shivam pulls Sharon and takes her with him and disappears.

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Scene shifts to the heaven.

Fairy: Kriya Pari'.apke dost khatre mein hai'Bhayanak Cheevam ne unhe pakad liya hai.

Kriya: Kya? Koun Khatre mein hai?

Fairy: Are wahi apki dost jo apko niche dikhati thi'brhenji bulati thi.

Kriya: Sharon! Oh god!

Fairy: Haan haan wahi.

Kriya: Mein use bachane ja rahi hoon.

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So'I know it was small..but kya karoon I cud think of only this much and ya btw nxt update on Pg 28

Plz comment and like!

Yipeee I'm the first one to comment.
Coming to the update the update was awesome loved the Swaron convo in hospital.
The heaven and the pari bit was fantastic.
Please update soon dear and PM me when you will update next.

Nice reading..
Swaron - Shivam part was great...
Waiting for the part 8...
Update it soon haa ...

superb update

Hey guys wanna spam...plz I'm getting extremly bored :(