Mirage #4 NEW NOTE Pg 146 18/2/2013

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mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: BARUN-myladdu
i cant see d pic hun...

http://s1151.photobucket.com/albums/o624/lilly2051/?action=view&current=Pikachufull1046267_zpsfd006dbe.jpg

giving you the link hope it helps...

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mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: BARUN-myladdu

wat??wat wat wat waaattt??????????
i js checked n i cant see d pic...somebody tell me wat ws it???

you are so desperate to see the picture 🤣🤣🤣

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arshi_sri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

hey... loved your ff...the story is really intresting...but plz dont make it a sad ending...

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starangel1290

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

hi,CONGRATS 4 nw thread.

well i'd luv 2 say dat u r a SUPERB writer ,👍🏼

U KNOW WAT , ACTUALLY I M A SILENT READER OF UR FF frm D BEGINING, I READ IT usually ON MY MOBI SO unable 2 write any COMMENTS . SORRRYYY FOR DAT.WAT I WANNA TELL U IS DAT AFTER FINISHING DIS FF WHY dnt U R PUBLISHING IT AS A NOVEL. I MEAN ur STORY IS VERY DIFF. frm d SHOW except d NAME OF CHARACTERS RESEMBLES 2 DAT OF D SHOW.

Ya, I know u must b thnkng i m nuts, but dats wat always cum 2 my mind whenever i read ur FF.

D WAY U REVEAL EVERYTHNG, OMG I dnt hv any words 2 xplain. more i read ur ff more i fall for ur WRITING .

I just HOPE U GV IT A GUD ENDING.

U KNOW , i mreally serious abt novel. BCOZ I LUV READING NOVELS n i m a fan of CHETAN BHAGAT nd SYDNEY SHELDON. I LUV der writing style. n now ITS UUU.😊

OMG I make it so long no. now i m gonna stop my blabberings otherwise u will b bored by me.

U REALLY ROCKKKSSS.👏

THNX fr gvng us such a nyc FF.😊

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mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

As the time is approaching for the next update my mind is stuck between two situations 😕

The first is Khalid telling the entire truth of his life, telling everything about his past...

his silent love for Aarti, his silent confession to her, him leaving her, her forgetting him, her falling with Abbas, Abbas dumping her, she becoming pregnant with Arnav and leaving her family and friends behind, him finding her in Delhi after some 8 years, his vocal confession, his offer to be the father of her child, first her rejection but then accepting his proposal, her coming to Delhi with Arnav, their stay at his farmhouse, and then someone killing her.

I want him to tell her each and everything about his past which is even slightly associated with Aarti... and then am sure Khushi will tell Arnav the truth in a way which will cause him less pain and less shock too. but before that revelation i want Arnav to tell Khalid that Shyam is blackmailing Aman with his family, he has kept his family in hostage and demanding to kill someone from the gang as their freedom price. am sure khalid would be able to guess whose life Shyam is after... giving extra protection to Arnav and maybe even giving him the early marriage... yeah i know that would be an ideal situation towards smooth and happy ending without any blood bath and most probably you have not planned it...

So considering your past record am sure you are not planning any of the above... you are a shocker queen and always love to give shocks to your readers so you will come up with some twisted track...🤢

So the second situation 😵 which is scaring me since last night is Arnav hearing the half truth from Khalid maybe only the last part you know Aarti's death, blaming Khalid for his mother's death assuming him as his father to whom he used to hate, not telling him anything about shyam and Aman's family, refusing his love and affection which Khalid will definitely try to shower when he will first see him as Aarti's son, Khushi not telling him about Abbas because of his pain, Arnav deciding to go to Abbas forgetting completely about Aman, Khushi supporting him in his decision because of the fact that Abbas is his father, and they both will walk into lion's den by themselves, resulting more troubles for themselves...

now the questions are what will Abbas's move??? how will Khalid protect Arnav?? but before that how will Khalid know that Arnav's life is in danger??? what will happen to Aman and his family???

and now the million dollar question is which route will you take????😆

yes yes i know i know that i am mad but the damage is beyond repair now... i can't think anything else when am so much worried for ArHi 😳

i don't know what will i do when this FF will end... how will i spend my spare time and the most important thing is what will i do to keep running my mind even in my sleep and off course whom will i dream about???😆😆😆

and see i can give you the review of the chapter even before you update it 😉😛😆