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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

*sigh*...and you still make me want an Arnav in my life with this chapter!!! *SOBS* Where can I get an Arnav????

I thought this chapter was a MAJOR breakthrough. Because Arnav and Khushi were comfortable enough to talk about stuff which sometimes some people don't talk about at all!! So two thumbs up to you for that! I have a feeling Khushi will take it upon herself to keep Arnav with her at all costs :)

Thank you for the PM :) I can't wait to read more!

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

after this chap am wantin a person lyk arnav for myself...

thry r so free in talkin to eachoter even though their relation s nly 2 weeks old...

am waitin eagerly to knw wat will kushi tell...

awsum update

dont stress urself

tanx 4 d pm...

continue soon

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

love the way they cant talk it out between them...awesome!!
oh god...i wonder how would khushi react to this honest but blunt confession of arnav!!
really curious as in what turn this relationship is going to take!!

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Really good to know that both of them placed thier own heart before each other... and you evil girl, left us hanging...

Loved the update ... Now, waiting for the next..

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

What a spine-tingling,goosebump-raising, heart-pounding update Naina.
How well you have depicted Khushi's POV.
Her fears of the strange sensations, of the unknown, her desire - these are all so real.
And Arnav, what a hero you are turning to be - truthful, honest, concerned about your woman...muuaah.

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yadiyada

@yadiyada

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Loved it! In this day and age of instant gratification above all else, it is a pleasant and refreshing change to read such honesty in a relationship. The game of holding off can be just as enjoyable!

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

This was an outstanding piece of writing. You built the tension so masterfully, yet with such softness and tenderness, can't help but stand up and clap for you!!!👏👏👏

Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us and I hope you will update soon! 😊

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hatathbristi

@hatathbristi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Naina,
Just Perfect Update..
Perfect emotions, realization and admission..to their thoughts, view points and believes...👏👏

And I guess n Hope its not heading to break up but a proper and sound foundation to their relationship..I dont mind a small term separation..in between them for some Introspection..BOth sides...

Edited by hatathbristi - 12 years ago