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tennismaniac19

@tennismaniac19

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Hey Naina! Sorry for not being able to comment on the previous update. Was a little busy.

Very nice updates! You're developing the story really well. The ups and downs of a relationship etc. ... Well done!

I also liked Aman a lot. Nice guy 😊

Update soon and congratulations on the new thread!!! 👏

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AnnieCheli1997

@AnnieCheli1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Heyy... Great update!! :) xxx
Loved how she still talks to RR instead of using Arnav's real email addy!! :) xxx
Continue soon!! :) xxx

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

2 nce update . U even added aman prespctiv wow.(aman a gud man). Khushi's own busines it vuld b awsum

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Ah...Loved their convo...Typical khushi...😆

So khushi started working with Aman...😊

And aman guessed something b/w them...😉

Ending was very good...so arnav came back frm sydney??wow...😛

Waiting for their convo...😃

Amazing update👏

Thanks for the pm😊

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

story makin great progress!!!wonderful writing!!!

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Awww, FINALLY Khuhsi Is Realizing 😳

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Hi Naina,

I love the pace you have set for this story! Very realistic for a new relationship where they are getting to understand each other better.

Look forward to the bodily appearance of the 'Voice' she craved for 😉.

And I adore ASR's 2 friends... I can visualize them sitting on both his shoulders advising him 😆

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Caught up with last three chapters

Amazing work

Was fun reading the penthouse conversation

Reading for RRji reply

Thanks for the PM

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Hey!

I love this chapter!

I think that this chapter for me anyway, shows how Arnav and Khushi's relationship has come along way. Khushi seems to have matured a lot and Arnav seems more understanding 😊.

The length of this chapter was great! So thankyou for that.

I also liked that this chapter showed the reality of such relationships where both parties are away from eachother for a long period of time, yet seem committed in making it work.

Thanks for the PM. Please PM me once the next chapter is ready to go 😃.