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@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Awesome update... but soo short... why dear why???

loved the way u used khushi's pov. It was clear how terrified she was of her current situation that she was suffering like this. arnav is still trying hard to gave khushi all she dreamed for but after what he did to khushi it really is not that simple.. And kushi's humare rajkumar was sooo innocent of her...
yes yes for a change i am reading before pms instead of wayyy after reading pms. this is what happens when u come late at IF and don;'t see a pm from lazyleaves...

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anarshi

@anarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#422

omg!!!! poor soul her rajkmar is Arnav, life can be so unfair sometime...hope their future would be with lots of love..

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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#423

Read 4 and 5 together ...If chapter 4 was intriguing , the ending of 5 (Humare Rajkumar )had me stunned ...No wonder ASR is in grief ...

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#424

fab update..
Liked the her Pov in start..
Feeling so sad for her..
She thought it to be happiest time of her life..and but it turned out to be her destruction..
All that gold is not glitter..
*sigh*
He did damage beyond repairing..

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

very heart breaking...gud to see some improvment in kushi...continue soon

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Viviann

@Viviann

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#426

Hey, I just read all the updates in one go...and I must say u write soo wonderful, I really love your writing style! I had tears in my eyes while I was reading the parts, man how heartbreaking it was! Poor Khushi she had dreams like any other girl about her wedding and rajkumar and all, really feel sorry for her! :(

Please update soon, cant wait to read more.. :)

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kooltoad

@kooltoad

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

"Hamare Rajkumar"

The two words stand out like an innocent dream, hope, love, happiness...

And all shattered by the very person...

My heart skipped a beat or two after reading the last two words...
U brought tears to my eyes...

Beautiful... ❤️

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kooltoad

@kooltoad

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#428

I liked khushi's dream... She is still numb and doesn't react much so its good to see her brain work sub-conciously and bring out her feelings in the form of dreams...

I am happy that u wrote her pov... Thanks... :)

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#429

oh dear lord! what in the world? I never thought you would write something like this! I'm used to reading things like late from you! this is so good, I'm sure I'm going to have bad dreams tonight (I hope i dont)
destroyed was so depressing and sad, I'm glad iI read it all together now, if I had had to wwait for updates on that one I'd have surely gone crazy! and thank goodness for this sequel! It is so good

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dorindakate

@dorindakate

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#430

I found it before the pm!!!

Don't scrap a chapter!!! The flashback style is fine...

Arnav has a long way to go, but at least he is doing it all for her...taking care of her like she was a baby or very small child...

Khushi sweety, remembering your family at home is one thing, but remembering your life with Arnav is going to be traumatic...she needs professional help--or at least unbiased...

Hey, write the story your way...just anxious to see what happens next...but I'll be patient...