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Natasha

@tash10

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#391

I loved how you portrayed the dream! It had such a deep connect!! And I am feeling all the more sad for Khushi, how her dreams have been shattered so ruthlessly!! Just looking at her innocence makes me so teary!!! Arnav vowing to bring the former Khushi back...will he manage to be successful!! I really hope so!! Superb update!!

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samster03

@samster03

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#392

Heart wrenching update..!!! :( "hamare rajkumar" i cannot stop myself from crying after reading the last part..!!! Will arnav be able to bring khushi back to life ..?? Your writing is really amazing and portrays the emotions well..!!! Hats off to you ..!!!! :)

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Sadaf

@butterfly06

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Awww khushi please talk na

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#394

DOUBLE L ...FANTASTIC MERGE OF FB AND PRESENT SITUATIONS

KHUSHI'S P O V IS REQUIRED TO KNOW HER FEARS

YOU MISSED SENDING ME THE PM

NO ISSUES ...KEEP ME POSTED FOR THE NEXT

KKKA

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pinky89

@pinky89

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Awesome update !!!! All her dreams shattered ...

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jd08

@jd08

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#396

Hopefully he can bring happiness in her life again

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nisha2701

@nisha2701

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#397

no need to write again:)its beautiful!!

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#398

the dream was really scary...gave a feel of how khushi must feel so trapped...

She feels that even now he has probably left her to go meet Lavanya...
she is going to need a lot more time to heal...

she is innocence and purity personified and deserves so much more...
very happy to see her POV and looking fwd to more...

definitely liked the writing style for khushi's pov..it was simple and innocent like her... :)