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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome loved it...continue soon...i always wait fr the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was beautiful, Arnav making progress in trying to bring back the old Khushi. Guilt must be killing him seeing that she had dreams like every girl of a husband. I cried at the last Rajkumar part, she got married to him with all dreams & anticipations of a newly bride & he turned her life into a nightmare.
plz update this work of ur's on priority as I am very addicted to it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!!! :) I like Arnav's efforts but its really not possible to bring that old Khushi back, atleast that's what I think. What he did doesnt deserve forgiveness, thats all I have to say...
Do update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update.i loved khushi's pov written by you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭 That last paragraph just killed me. 😭

Seriously wouldnt want you to re-write a whole chapter! It's your story...tell it how you want to tell it...we've been with you all the way so far and I don't think we're going anywhere just because the writing style is different. It makes it interesting and keeps our brains alert! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
arnav is trying his best to restore kushi's happiness.whayever he is doing he is doing as he is guilty for torturing her,But will he admire her beauty & nature, will he fall in love with her😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally we got our update amezing one arnav is so caring love the update continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love the story!!!i am crying after reading humare rajkumar line...i dont think arnav can fully redeem himself even though he is doing his best lets see how this will work out.

As for her dream...its nice the way you wrote!i think when she was at her parents house there was smiles,laughter,joy and sunshine. and then the door is arnav who looks beautiful and rich from the outside but when she entered inside the room,she got caught in the darkness,hatred and an unlovable situation...resembling what she is feeling and going through now!!dont know whether i am right...

But please continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my god the dream it was amazing seriously so scary but true i feel so pitty for Khushi still i feel no matter Arnav do but those three months have killed Khushi many deaths awesome update loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Seems like arnav's getting there...but still he has a long way to go!!

khushi still numb...why isnt she talking..??!or responding...she still feels so lifeless..!!
Waiting to see how arnav's going to bring the old khushi bak!!

And HE saw the paper cuttin..and "hamare rajkumar"sounded so cute and sad...arnav seemed to have shattered her dreams so bad!!!!!!!!!!

Waiting for the next!!!!!!!!!

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