*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS:Unconditional

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

i dont feel that this chapter is a filler!!!

shows how much he is trying to make her normal...but what i m waiting is some kind of outburst or reaction from khushi!!!

waiting for the next update

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shabi8

@shabi8

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

wow i cant stop myself falling for him and todays episode made me so... i know you will handle it great and give justice to khushi...

loved this chapter very much..

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

I'm loving this!

Only if Arnav realized all this before then khushi would have been happy. But I'm glad that he's personally doing everything for her.

Zehra please make her speak na, this khushi is killing me. Please!

And I think this was a good chapter not a filler.

Continue soon! 🤗

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Zehra i loved it !!!!!! 🤗

wonderful start !!!!!!

Arnav is doing his redemption to perfection !!!!!

am sure khushi will understand soon !!!!

loved it 👏

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Congrats on the second thread Zehra.

Lovely part four. You are portraying how ASR is taking care of her and how he is feeling guilty.

I hope Khushi forgives him. Otherwise ASR will be completely broken and destroyed.

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

I always enjoy the subtle details in your work. How her eyes close briefly as he touches her. The hair oil treatment (sigh!) was a beautiful touch. He knows it relaxes her.

Her muteness is powerfully adding to the mood of this piece.

It's a testament to your writing that I can hate his past acts but not hate him.

Maya

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Arnav has started to care about Khushi after the ordeal,hope he mends his ways.A Good update.

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Jujuk

@Jujuk

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

great great !!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 Love it to the core!

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

i got choked while reading this...its seriously very painful. The SS touched my heart. Each and every emotion is very well written. I really loved it :). Continue soon

Please pm me when you update.

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Debadrita

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