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Posted: 13 years ago
Arnav is trying his best to redeem himself. Wonderful update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all congrats on the new thread 😃 and loving the way you're taking the ss, the slow but steady (well thought out and precise) steps arnavs taking like basically rewinding and redoing in the correct manner seriously didn't think arnav could be liked after all that but I do appreciate the effort that he is taking throughout the whole process anywho loving the update so was not a filler and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
What a beautiful update! This might sound crazy but I do think it was beautiful...the last part were her put oil in her hair is just a small way he's trying...but he will need to do a lot of things to redeem himself but it seems Khushi is well...affected by him...I'll just have to wait for the story to unfold more won't I? Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was an amazing update...
He cares so much about her...Loved it...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats on the new thread. It was so painful to see Khushi's condition and Arnav is trying his level best to make her normal. Hopefully Khushi will respond to his love and care and they have a heart to heart talk. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Am so happy he realized he didn't have the right to treat her thus, even if she had been guilty.
Lovely update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb...n thx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey. .sorry for the late reply.. have been busy and trying hard to not come to IF..
I read your updates earlier.. but didn't get a chance to comment.

He is taking such good care of her.. in fact a little too much.. no.. but then again, I guess he should repent for all that he did to her..

First I didn't understand why she is going along with everything.. she is just letting him pamper her, not objecting.. nor even asking why he is doing it.. but then again, poor thing must be confused.. earlier when she expected love, she got hate.. and now she is expecting hate, but he is showering her with love.. and she must be scared, unsure of when its going to change back to hate ...

I can't relate to this girl.. so I'm feeling kind of weird reading this story..
But of course I love your writing.. and this story is so touching! I am dying to know what is going to happen!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
so Arnav trying to bring her back to life.. good..
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Posted: 13 years ago
I know I haven't been commenting lately and I feel terrible. But I read them...I read every single word. I wish I could tell you in person what an amazing talent you have but I can't. The ocean kinda gets in the way. So I hope this will suffice.

P.S. I love the fact that it's still "their" house inspite of everything that has happened.

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