Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01

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tmbs

@tmbs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

great update...with ever new update i fall in love with your writing more nd more...waiting eagerly for the next😊

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

oh god!! even i am visualizing!! hope riya wont fall down.. i think its arjun.. both rathore n riya is going to blast his head off!!

Yeh dono miya-biwi, ek se ziddi! Meri acchi khaasi research specialist ko bhi apne jaisa bana diya ha Rawte ne!

loved this dialougue!! lol

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Hats off to u for potraying such a beautiful story with the xtraordinary song.each word of the lyrics go perfectly with d scene.i wished we could have seen dis in d show as well

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Di u deserve a salute for dis frm me...
awesum..loved it..
one of my fav readings
lots of claps..
Riya came to veerpur as mrs acp arjun rawte wow..!!
beautiful bonding btw all...
what happened in d end left me shocked..!!!!
where is arjun??
hope ariya is fine..
excellent di...
keep rocking di..!!!

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

i guess tat would be arjun sir.. interesting update yaar..

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Superb update dear :) loved it

finally riya is in veerpur to save his arjun..

loved rathore's dialogue "rawte ne riya ko bhi apne jaise bana diya"😆

hope riya is safe and nothing happens to her and baby...

eagerly waiting for next part

update soon

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diva

@rockz.diva

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

hey jus read chapter 6 & 7
n see m cryng😭 aww m feeling really very bad riya..u hve portrayed all d emotions very well...
loved rathod's dialouges...
convo b/w shree-chotu-riya is soo nicee..
n n riya will b safe na?? where is arjun ji 😲
plzzz riya ko kuch mat hone dena 😭😭😭 aab i cant cry more meri ariya awww m missing dem...
itz superb emotional touched..
juldi ariya ko milado...
waitng for next part itz juz superbb

Edited by rockz.diva - 12 years ago

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

A great update as usual Di, 😊
I could also visualize the whole situation...
But please end the suspense soon Di, I can't wait to read the next part
Thanks for the PM