Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

very funny and cute...so many cute nhok jhok dialogs!! felt like watching ARIYA moments all over again!!! lovely update...

I love this line "Lo.. Inn miya-biwi ne mere office ko kabbadi ka ground bana diya hai.."

was laughing out...

then the poori tank chahiye was sooo cute and hilarious...

I just hope that the mission goes on well and they all come back safe!!!

cont soon!

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Hey , avantika!!!!😊

Thanx for the PM. And the update was as usual mindblowing... Fantastic... 👏👍🏼 Just waiting for the Part-B of this chapter..wo kya hai na pet barta hi nhi .. want some more😆😉

Ummm🤔 update soon!!!!waiting,...😊

Love,

Deep😛

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Running out of words Avantika, you are that good.

Okay here we go, this is a favorite word of a very dear friend of mine.

"Superliked" the update. You worry too much, anything you write always turn out really good. And I really love the fake anger and the light hearted moments between Riya and Arjun, and it is even more entertaining when the other three members are around to witness and tease them.

Thanks so much for continuing this and for the PM.

Will look forward to more on this and your other work of course.