Ariya SS: Madno Re!! (Chap 3-Pg.8) 14/9

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Jannat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

superb and emotional update
Beautifully shows riya's feeling
Thanx 4 d pm n update soon 😊

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

You have to continue!
Its brilliant!

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

that was very heartbreaking dear😭

Beautifully written😊

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Preethi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awesome dear.. waiting for next part.. pm me...

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Akku

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Continue continue continue. I am sounding like a Despo but plzzz continue!

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sehrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

lovely os

arjun resigning and leaving riya alone aww

riyas thought imagination were all great

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Brilliant work dear!
You've potrayed Riya's emotions very well.
Cntnu on please.

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Vry Nyc..

Riya's feelng superb..👏

plz continue.. & PM me.

whn Arjun understand her feelngs

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

awww that was painful..:-( my doll...i always knew that n yes ur rite this will happen in the show also...riya is gonna be left alone...:-(
plz continue this as an FF or at least SS...would love to know what happens next...arjun leaves or not?? if yes how will ariya meet again...so many questions..:-D

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varshini karthik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Seriously Amazing!! probably this is what will happen at the end coz no one has said that Riya and Arjun will get together in the show! But i would love it if they get together!

the way you portrayed the emotions was very beautiful!