Oh! Mr. So Called Jealous! - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
kiddo thats fine... chal thik hai... if u want to toh karle thoda sa kaam.. but thoda sa hi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
awesome intro and CS..
you also include uday..i loved his character in mjht..
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
wow awesomeee intro and character sketch...
ufff DODO and 'T' are also in this story... :PP
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Loved d characther skech updTe soon ...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
WOW!! really 😃

Loved Intro and Character sketch..❤️

Continue..😊

And pm me..!!

Update soon..I"ll be waiting..! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
really nice!⭐️

infact uday n T r my favorite characters too.🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
loved character sketch 👏
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Mr oh so jealous!

Part 1

It was a normal day in st Louis , students roaming around everywhere, some being goody goody kids attending their classes and some being naughty and having fun in bunking classes , just like any other college st Louis was like that , but one thing it was the most famous and best colleges of Mumbai no dought in that 1 !

In the RH time for next class

Dringg !!! dring!!

Person : kya yaar i don't want to go to maths lesson woh sadu teacher bhot paka tha hai yaar aur woh lesson bhot boring hai yaar!

Person 2 : i know yaar Vicky chal aaj bunk karte hai what say ?

Voice: no bunking dude i told you , agar lesson attend nahi karoge toh exams mein kaise pass hoge?😡

Vicky: what yaar rey !( yes guys our padaku rey ,he is still the cool dude guy , but he loves his studies), hamesha padai padai , lets just bunk yaar aur waise bhi yeh hamara pehla bunk hai right guys?😉

Rey : no Vicky yeh tera pehla nahi hai balke let me think ... 10th time your bunking

Nilesh whispering to bharat : yaar yeh toh count bhi karta hai😕

Bharat : haan yaar mein bhi wahi sochraha tha

Swayam : rey chal na aaj bunk karte hai please waise mera bhi mann nahi hai ?

Girl : haan rey agar swayam kehraha hai toh chalna lets bunk

Rey : Sharon no means no (Sharon accepting swayam decision weired right lol) lets go guys

Just then rey receives a tex on his phone

Message : rey please come with your gang to my office i need to talk to you guys urgently come quik am waiting

Rdx

Rey : ummm guys RDX calling us we got to go

Vicky : thank god no lesson , i wish RDX lambi baatein kare ke lesson khatam hohjaye aur humein jana na pade everyone started to laugh😆

They came out the RH , rey was in the front walking when he bumped into someone very hard ...

Rey : WATCHOUT DUDE !

Voice: tum !

Rey : UDAY! Mein ne kyun nahi socha ke tum hi hoge😡

Uday : excuse me MR khadoos ( uday calls him that he dosnet like rey alot)

Rey : kya bola tune?

Uday : i ..i. mean rey mere bhai next time mein dekh kar chalunga waise tum log ja kaha rehe ho

Rey : jhannam mein chalna hai?

Uday : jahannam! waah yaar sounds nice mein chaloon ?, rey felt like punching him one so hard but he controlled himself😆

Swayam : uday hum princi ke office jarahe hai chal! And uday comes along to

Back to atrium : just then a beautiful girl enters the college , everyone is looking at her ( that happens when a new person comes)

Girl : yeh log sab mujhe aise kyun dekhrhe hai kabhi koyi larki dekhi nahi kya ! hey universe ji please aaj ka din let it go good no fight please

All the boys were drooling over her but she never cared

Girl to a random boy : umm can you tell me where the princi office is please?

The boy stared at her for a bit and tehn said : up the stairs 1st door on your right

Girl: cool thanx and she went off to the princi cabin..

In princi cabin:

Principle was talking to rey and the gang about the improvement of the college just then they heared a knock on the door

Knock knock

Girl : can i come in sir?

Principle : umm yes come in

Girl : thanks principal sir!

Principle : so ready for the 1st day ?
Girl : yes sir!
Principle : u dont look nervous!
Girl : sir ! wo .. me nervous kyun hun? i should be confident!
Principle : i like your confidence! and i saw ur last year result and m glad to know that u r really talented!!
Girl : Thank u sir! just then she turned back and uday saw her..

Uday : mein sapna toh nahi dekhraha hoon yeh sati savitri kaun hai ?
Rey glared at him , uday looked at him and got scared and put his fingers on his lips..

girl : sati sav what ?

uday : oh toh tum kriya hi ho ? mujhe laga ke kriya ki koi hamshakal toh nahi!

girl : gosh uday ! tum pagal ho ?

mady : pagal toh mujhe yeh behenji lagti hai! she muttered to her chamchis

kriya : uh excuse me mind your own buisness please

sharon thinking : chalo koi toh mere jaisa toh hai

kriya: umm so princi can i start my lessons today?

princi : sure umm 1st do you want to see the college?

kriya: umm sure..

uday : mein kriya ko college dikha dunga chalo kriya

they all left


uday gave a bone crushing hug to kriya ( obviously he was seeing her after a long time)

kriya : umm uday you squashing me chodo !

uday : oh sorry tum kab ayi i was waiting for you the whole day

kriya : sorry woh mein toda late uthi thi you know me an my sleep


rey was getting really irritated looking at uday and kriya closeness

kriya : waise yeh log? pointing to the gang

uday : oh yeh , yeh mere friends wait ill introduce you to them chal !

uday : yeh vicky , neha swayam , sharon, vishaka , simmie , rinnie , then he came to rey yeh MR KHADOOS rey glared at him i..i.. mean reyaansh we call him rey , aur yeh pointing to maddy yeh maddy hai (proper majnu type) maddy jsu gave him a dirty look whilst uday was stairing at her


kriya waved at them and said : hi guys

uday : guys meet my chuddy buddy , my best friend kriya ( wondering why he never said cousin you will find out soon)


thats it guys update yaha khatam hope you all enjoyed it

jhoota chappal all welcome , do leave your precious comments and dont forget to click the like button

adios!

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sharon dress

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kriya dress

Edited by aishasully - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
res
unresed..!!

lol uday kitna weird aur funny hai..!! same as mjht..!!
mady d attitude queen maybe..!!
loved d way u potrayed kriya..!!
rey's jealous wow..!!

1st part was amazing..
curiously w8tng fr d further updates..!!😊
Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Aisha ko aaj pitne ka irada hai nah...
Chal lag ja...Nahut hi jayada pitegi mujse...
Aur koi sawal

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