Aitbaar(Trust)(AK FF)Pt-29-31, Pg-74, 05-14-2014

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vamita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Adi turned 9 today. Sorry, he loves to be called Adi...Was frowning when I wrote his full name...!

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Anila

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Iqbal-Neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Its a great ff.Pls pm me next time when u update.

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Palika Arora

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sorry for being late but cant help.having light problems here But cant miss a chance So Wish u very Happy Birthday Our Dear Adi.May God bless u with lots of Happiness,success and long life.Congrats to u too di.U r also blessed this day with wonderful feeling of being mother.

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Nehageet.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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okk no problem , yess i m doing fully enjoy hare dear palika

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vamita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: armaghan0
amazing part really interesting characters and i really like the fact that angad was at her doorstep at the end because really get frustrated with undue misunderstandings was eagerly waiting fr the part but it was all worth it loved ur detailed writing

Originally posted by: flowers4u
amazing update...feeling bad for kripa...loving the story...kep on writing

Originally posted by: loveSR
wonderful update...
continue soon

Originally posted by: aroramaina
Its getting very interesting.Now Kripa will really try to get independent I think.Annu was missing Prithvi naa .Lo Prithvi ke saath Mishti free dono bhai behan kabab mein haddi aa hi gaye.So Josh is surely Angad's friend who Angad wants to keep an eye on Kripa.Now actually journey of Aitbaar is going to start.Cant wait for next update.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
amazing update di.
jus when i thought that may be kripa was coming out of shell she has gotten back into it.she is too sensitive here and i can understand this is what makes her insecure as she feels that she isn't a right match for her. But she has to become strong if not for anyone else then for herself.
thanks for pm
lvd it

Originally posted by: soni4eva
Amazin update luvd it x

Originally posted by: fffan123
Lovely update,

Originally posted by: JRia
wow ! Kripa's first party..Loved the part very much

Originally posted by: MAANeet_2
read all the updates in one go...
amazing story
continue soon

Originally posted by: Iqbal-Neha
Its a great ff.Pls pm me next time when u update.

Originally posted by: nehageet
okk no problem , yess i m doing fully enjoy hare dear aroramina

Thanks everyone, for your wonderful comments...! Palika dear, Prithvi Mishti ko to ana hi tha...! Nahi to story ka maza hi kya...! And Megha, you are right...Kripa needs to be strong for herself...! Let's see, what will make her determination strong...! armaghan0, ha ha...Aab ye to hona hi tha...! Thanks everyone once more...!

Lots of love

Mitu

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vamita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Annu, Deepa...Will wait for her to finish it and then read, if my eyes are intact till the year you mentioned...😆 But I really hope Pallavi finishes it some day and I get to read it...!😉

Deepa, you are right...The elders are to be blamed here...Many elders think that what they do for their kids is the right thing, but sometimes, they fail to understand the real situation and think from their kids point of view...Angad is also in the same boat and thinks this is the best thing for Kripa...Whether he is right or no, only time will tell...It is always a human thinking that he knows the best and sometimes he is proven right and sometimes he fails and learns from the mistakes...He thought that if he told about Josh to her, it will be again like him supporting all through the way, instead of Kripa going forward herself and taking help if needed...! Kripa is unaware of this friendship of Josh and Angad as they decided it will be that way...Kripa is now in a boat in midst of ocean with only a small row in her hand...! Now we need to see, if she tries harder or give up...! And Angad, is he ready to take this risk in future, because this would definetly keep interfering their relationship...!

Annu dear, caught me there for sure, but I corrected it...It is only one day 4 hours class instead of most 1 or 2 hours class, he said...Sometimes, I am so tied up with kids, that I make many silly mistakes...Kripa is overall confused about everything...She is not sure if their marriage would work, because they are both so different from eachother...She is confused to see Angad with someone so happy, she is confused about herself, if she will meet Angad's expectations and moreover she is missing Avantika and others in midst of such confusing state...Though she was close to Avantika, but still did not talk about any of her doubts or confusions with her, she still felt safe and cooconed with her, and she is missing that safety coocon for the first time and is lost for answers...! She needs assuarance, that everything would be alright...But still there is no one, who could give her that, because we are the makers of our own life...We can shape it as we want and when we want, but Kripa being so shy and lonely, is not able to understand this for now...! She is unable to think further than her doubts...She is being too judgemental, because she is not seeing from anyone else's point of view, but hers...And you are right, it takes a lot to change ourself and Kripa is expecting overnight miracle, which she needs to understand that it is not going to happen...! Let's see, how they handle this situation overall...!

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Sama

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I clapped on Prithvi's entry 👏 😆 Oh, he was always around, we only didn't notice, haha. Oh crap, the friend is none other than Josh, never mind. Everyone knows everyone, hmm lets see how that goes. Kripa is going to do singing rehearsals for 4 hrs? 😲 And later also teach children! ok. But I think thats the only good thing that has happened to her so far, she is at least happy. Mishti's advances to Angad, I don't know why Angad didn't slip 😆 He is yet not in love with Kripa. Simply not interested in her maybe. Am I the only one who thinks Angad keeps repeating the same things to Kripa every time but she fails to understand and the next minute she is paranoid! Kripa's hurt is fine but anger and switching the phone off is not what exactly I expected from her. Especially that they're not man and wife in the true sense, and not living together, plus I think Kripa knows thats Angads life like abroad. I'm expecting a little something of AK in the dorm room, damn you stopped right there.

When I was reading the part where all friends meet, I was making up scenarios in mind how they should immediately be told AK are married, their shocked faces etc 😆 Mishti annoyed me, she needs to know Angad is no bachelor. Angad's idea is stupid, even though I do think Kripa needs to be left alone to get independent. I just hope Kripa makes a friend and starts talking. The way its going, I don't think she is going to open up to anyone. Honestly, I understand other characters better than hers. But I'm trying to be patient, just wait to see when Kripa talks 😳 😆

Nice part Vamita. Happy belated b'day to Adi. I hope he and all had a nice time 😊

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Sama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: Annu..

<font color="#990000">actually Prithvi se pehle Josh ne
entry maar di thi which is quite unusual toh bass zra fikr ho rahi thi mujhe..😆</font>

<font color="#990000">who's left.. Simone?😳</font>

Of course. And Tanya. Wheres Harshini.

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vamita

@vamita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: -Sama-
I clapped on Prithvi's entry 👏 😆 Oh, he was always around, we only didn't notice, haha. Oh crap, the friend is none other than Josh, never mind. Everyone knows everyone, hmm lets see how that goes. Kripa is going to do singing rehearsals for 4 hrs? 😲 And later also teach children! ok. But I think thats the only good thing that has happened to her so far, she is at least happy. Mishti's advances to Angad, I don't know why Angad didn't slip 😆 He is yet not in love with Kripa. Simply not interested in her maybe. Am I the only one who thinks Angad keeps repeating the same things to Kripa every time but she fails to understand and the next minute she is paranoid! Kripa's hurt is fine but anger and switching the phone off is not what exactly I expected from her. Especially that they're not man and wife in the true sense, and not living together, plus I think Kripa knows thats Angads life like abroad. I'm expecting a little something of AK in the dorm room, damn you stopped right there.

When I was reading the part where all friends meet, I was making up scenarios in mind how they should immediately be told AK are married, their shocked faces etc 😆 Mishti annoyed me, she needs to know Angad is no bachelor. Angad's idea is stupid, even though I do think Kripa needs to be left alone to get independent. I just hope Kripa makes a friend and starts talking. The way its going, I don't think she is going to open up to anyone. Honestly, I understand other characters better than hers. But I'm trying to be patient, just wait to see when Kripa talks 😳 😆

Nice part Vamita. Happy belated b'day to Adi. I hope he and all had a nice time 😊

Hey Sama...Prithvi will be there no matter what...! In the background or in the highlights...Story won't be there without him...Only thing is he appeared before us at the time of party...He was just another classmate for Kripa until this point...😉

And as for Angad...You know college friendship is something, which we never see much about all this...Many love to spend time together, they just put hand on shoulders, may be even hug and kiss eachothers cheeks, if they are girls...It is all innocent and think absolutely nothing about it...And it is ok...But at somepoint one needs to realize that this might itself may get them in problems...That is the reason, many parents don't like there girls in India, specially families like mine, to be more friendly with boys and keep a distance even when talking or doing work...Angad, is no different here...Until now, he had no obligations and thought nothing about it, and still didn't even though he is married and is just taking casually, until the moment Mishti kissed...Then too, he took it easily, as he had seen her doing the same with his friends and knew she was a flirt...But the moment he heard Kripa's name, and saw her, he knew that this was all something which is not right and though it was general friendship, he was feeling a little uncomfortable and knew that she was upset...He was tongue tied and caught in his own web of lies and he could do nothing but go with it and Kripa did the same...!

Back to Kripa, yeah it is not like her to cut the phone, but you see, when you are married, though unknowingly, you have a streak of possisiveness in you, which you yourself don't realize and she has it in her and felt bad, seeing him so happy with someone else...She wanted to materialize her feelings and try to understand the situation, and the best way she thought is to not talk to him right now, as she did not know what to say as it was just the situation, that none of them thought about throughly prior to this arrangement they had set themself into...!

Kripa's fears, confusion, all will be reaveled in time and you will know what her inner most thoughts are as the story progresses...So, I hope you keep pateince till then...Thanks for the wishes...

Mitu

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