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Posted: 12 years ago
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Though no torture in present but the act of undressing herself made me cry thank u 4 pm loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I had been looking forward to it. Its not going to be an easy task ASR.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Happy to see the sequel to -Destroyed-.
I look forward to reading more.

This sentence made my heart lurch. My heart broke for what sort of hell-life he conditioned Khushi to in the past three months:

The moment he entered the room, he latched the door and saw Khushi already out of bed. She turned her back to him and brought her hands behind and started unzipping her kurta almost mechanically.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
I love you for making a sequel! Lol. And this part was really good! Loving Arnav's sorry state. Khushi make him suffer reeal hard! And thank god shes still with child. Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's wow!
Can you please hit Arnav with a danda? I seriously feel so mad at him right now. What has he done to khushi? I want to kill him.

I hope he'll make amends. And I really hope that he gets the taste of his own medicine, I want khushi to treat him like shit, then we'll see how Mr.ASR reacts. Huh!

Lovely chapter Zehra. I can't stop praising you, you are the best!
Continue soon 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Totally love it.
He is repenting like hell. He would fall invoke with her.
And she will probably hate him.
Thanks to Aman.
Great!!! She pregnant...with his child.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
oh awsm ...pls pm me when you continue...can't wait to read more

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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
u write so beautifully i cant wait to read more. and thanks fro the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can I comment something honestly:

I have mixed-feelings abt this update. I'm relieved that khushi's future as a mother is safe and aman developed a backbone finally but I don't like where it is going. The whole update and arnav's guilt has no effect on me, on the contrary it repulsed me coz his guilt can never equate the pain he gave to khushi and I have said it earlier and I'm saying it again that no amount of guilt or repentance is enough for arnav. That's why I hope it's not a redemption story of arnav, rather I would love to see arnav suffer the way he made khushi miserable.

I know these are some strong views but there are some crimes for which no punishment is enough and destroying a girl's life like this is no less then a crime
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was good...
i loved it...
thanxxx for the pm

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