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Posted: 12 years ago
This is so painful...but loves Nupur.
Cont soon dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Maria
amazingly written part
loved Mayur.continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
*sorry double post*😳.
Edited by -umi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Writer Note

Thank you so much everyone for beautiful comments🤗really means a lot to me..😳
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Maria (Remember me in your Prayers)



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Posted: 12 years ago

A Dark Love

Mayank was stood still as she approached him, eyes shimmering with emotions that was unfamiliar for him, "I know you haven't eaten anything'eat something" standing in front of him, her feet planted on the floor and eyes lifted at him looking him through her lashes, he sucked in sharp, low breath. Loneliness, anger on himself, disturbing memories everything had gotten disappeared somewhere when he'd dropped his gaze at her face meeting with her dark deep eyes, her worried face that was inviting him to scoop her in his strong grip and dip himself in her.

"I want to freshen up first before'having dinner" his voice had consumed the waves of hesitation as he knew it was the first time he was going against his mind. She had fluttered her lashes in amusement as his voice came out like a soft whisper---he didn't get offended or angry at her words but was agreed to what she was saying.

He'd ignored the loud thud of his heart to scan her beautiful features, remained silent, an amusement, the flicker of hope in her eyes, the concern in her voice and stare. It shouldn't have annoyed on himself but it had increased his attraction towards her and he felt if he didn't tear his eyes away he might get lost in them. He turned on his heels immediately and then taking long strides disappear from the hall making his way towards their room.Nupur had tried to shake off the feeling of strange desire'a desire to haul this man towards her and throw herself in his arms But then she took an unsteady breath reminding herself what she was thinking? She shrugged herself making her way towards kitchen to make dinner for him.

For her utter surprise he didn't show her disapproval or criticize what she made for him but had his dinner in silent and when she rose up to collect the glass and plates he had stood on his heels and had helped her cleaning the table. She felt as this was real Mayank'her heart wanted to feel this Mayank,taking out the tray stepping towards the kitchen she tried to shrug them away but it wasn't possible, lost in her thoughts when she took steps towards the doorway her injured foot tripped with the a vase placing in the way and a scream erupted from her lips.

" Nupur"Mayank rushed to hear her scream and taking the tray from her he kept that on the shelf and then he bent to see blood oozing from her injured foot, "No'it's hurt"

Her scream of pain filled the silence when Mayank touched her foot to see whether the wound was deep or not.He lifted his chin, his face was a mask of those strong emotions that he thought he had been banished, "I've said you not to do anything but you don't listen to me".

He rose on his feet meeting with her gaze and her heart leaped to see what she never had seen before'a soft hearted man who has a heart beneath the layer of taut mask of anger'his glare hadn't bothered her anymore as she could feel it was his concern for her.

He'd expected her anger smoldering eyes in the response of his scolding, her frustration, her tears but he didn't expect those deep stare at him scanning his expressions, trying to see beyond the layer of stiffness he'd turned his eyes balls away in quick motion to ignore her gazes.

"go to room'I bring ointment"

He spoke in a soft voice but she had felt the turmoil of emotions in his voice and her heart beat had risen she sucked in breath trying to hold on those emotions that was arousing in her heart for this man that he never felt before.

"I 'I can't walk"

She had hesitated for a moment as she realized what she was asking for and it was reflected in her voice too but she hadn't other choice except to ask him to scoop her in his arm and drop her on the bed as her wound was badly paining. He'd startled at her words and tilted his neck to gaze at her face who was now looking everywhere but not at his side'the hesitation was evidence from her face expression and then realizing her wound might be paining he shrugged away the strange desire that was arousing in him to savor the moment of her closeness, and then without saying any words he slipped his arms around her waist and had felt her body shuddered under his touch, it gave him strange sensation to feel his touch had effected her, with the quick motion he scooped her in his arm and she gasped feeling his scent close to her, hesitantly she had risen her arms to slip around his neck, aware of her nervous stare at him Mayank tried to hold his desire to lean and capture her lips for a deep kiss, he gulped trying to jerk his heart what he was thinking? But couldn't keep his eyes away from her face and had watched her expression so closely, her deep eyes, her fluttering lashes with nervousness, her parted pink lips in hesitation, her beautiful scent arousing his desires, her tiny soft body in his arm. He gasped feeling hard to keep his emotions in this heart that was willing to come out from his heart.

Closing the door with his foot he walked towards the bed and then laid her on it and then Nupur finally opened his eyes as she felt his arms moving beneath her skin, a chill ran down in her spine and her heart had leaped as his breath had touched her cheek and titling his lashes she realized his body was towering on her and his face was so close to her that if she moved slightly she could kiss him.she gasped allowing her eyes to fell on his face and then she had realized how closely he was starring her'her face burned as the pink color crept over her cheeks.

As he tried to pull back his arms he realized their closeness and when he looked at her side'he forgot to blink his eyes'closing her eyes, with her parted shivering lips, those pink cheeks and those nervous hesitating expressions she was looking the most beautiful girl he ever seen and that moment he felt he forgot everything'he forgot everything as his heart didn't want to remember anything but her. He didn't know when his hand moved slightly and his fingers came into contact with her soft skin, he had felt her shiver when he deliberately moved his fingers randomly on her skin and then brushing them with her skin he moved down to trace her jaw line she gasped and squeezed her eyes but didn't jerk him away'she felt as she wanting the same as he was doing'she felt as she was longing of his touch and when he leaned and brushed his lips with hers she didn't protest'his lips lingered on hers as wanted to feel the softness on them and when finally he'd sucked her lower lip capturing her mouth for deep kiss shrugging away all the protest of his mind she slipped her arms around his neck curling her fingers in his thick, dark hairs.

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Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part..
Loved it...
How much Mayank could deny...but his heart always pulled him towards Nupur...


Loved the last scene where Mayank finally followed his heart shutting his mind..and kissed her...
Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
rilliant update Maria
very beautifully portrayed emotions
loved the kiss at the end😳continue soon
-saliha- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an amazing part
loved Mayur ..amazingly written
loved it.continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant part
i am still lost in Mayur kiss🤪
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part
i loved Mayur kiss
can't wait for next part
do continue soon

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