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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shona3

nICe update 👏

loved it ❤️


Thank you !!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: divvk

Oye.. Amazing updated yaar! sorry for my late reply yaar.. was busy yesterday and will not be online today, might even miss the episode as i need to travel 😭


regarding the update, I really loved this way of story.. may be, u could have made shyam still lust on khushi but, without her knowledge and arnav getting to see everything and realize how much khushi would have suffered. But, I really loved this one and this is far far better than what we got in the episode. The writing is awesome! Show some comic things using NK.. May be NK- ASR bromance? 😉 Give all sorts of gaali's to Dadi in your story 😆 I think I am asking for everything I want to see in episode 😆 lol..



It's okie, I understand that you were busy...

Ya maybe I could have made Shyam lust him without her knowledge... but I wanted him to destroy the courage and support she had because of Arnav. Shyam's plan was pretty much to make her weak and extremely nervous. That was my approach. And to show that he has grown confident...

I would really love to make NK and ASR comic things.. but the thing is my hindi is worse than NK's and I can't really write stuff on hindi... The story is right now moving so intense... that comic relief is a bit hard to include. I can't imagine that I'm finding it difficult to write comic relief while I usually make lots of comic statements at home and here at IF...
NK and ASR bromance here is a serious side. It shows ASR's trust on NK... I personally really liked that...

Thank you for saying that...

Dadi!! She needs to be given a huge showdown from Arnav...

Still framing my story ... not concluded my the happenings in my next chapter...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sunset-



It's okie, I understand that you were busy...

Ya maybe I could have made Shyam lust him without her knowledge... but I wanted him to destroy the courage and support she had because of Arnav. Shyam's plan was pretty much to make her weak and extremely nervous. That was my approach. And to show that he has grown confident...

I would really love to make NK and ASR comic things.. but the thing is my hindi is worse than NK's and I can't really write stuff on hindi... The story is right now moving so intense... that comic relief is a bit hard to include. I can't imagine that I'm finding it difficult to write comic relief while I usually make lots of comic statements at home and here at IF...
NK and ASR bromance here is a serious side. It shows ASR's trust on NK... I personally really liked that...

Thank you for saying that...

Dadi!! She needs to be given a huge showdown from Arnav...

Still framing my story ... not concluded my the happenings in my next chapter...


thanks for understanding buddy.. just wanted to know your point of view for making the story this way. I really like this idea as well. I agree to the fact that this is a serious intense SS and it is difficult to include comedy.. may be, ask BTW for some NK gatiya hindi scenes 😆 I loved everything u had written 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sunset-


Sneaky Snake... is on everyone's nerves coz he is a downright creep... and a creep can't stay away from the prey... I've really done a lot of research on stalking and psychopath...

And Aman ... ya just for a few min... Technical support yar...

This part could have been longer... Actually I did start typing more... but then stopped... and cut it off here...

I haven't decided on the next part...

Shyam ... well in the end of the story he would... I don't know when though...

LOL ... I've never written stories!!! But I don't like making very short comments... coz a person has to think and take time to make a good post... so a 'one-word' comment will not appreciate as much as a baapwa comment... lol It's all ways nice to appreciated...

I have no clue how i'm gonna turn the story...





I hope you will continue!
Well you & your comments both are baapwa & now your next part should also be a baapwa one😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg! its getting scarier😲
update soon😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SubhaShreeNanda

omg! its getting scarier😲

update soon😉


Yep!! More to come...

Will update by tom!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear
shaamuuu😡
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: yashi_arnav

amazing update dear

shaamuuu😡
update soon


Yes dear!! will do soon !
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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
OHHH NOOO, khushi Would Be So Afraid To See Shyam In The House In Next Part :(( 🥺

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