FF- Sparkling Dreams (NEW CH8 pg 22) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
👍🏼 read prologue,was interested so read all 3 chp. want u to continue. at 1st thought it was 'inspired by KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI ??
what happened so drastic in A's life? where's Naina??
updt soon. pm me?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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... just when I was waiting for a bubbly update, you threw water on me and woke me up from my dreams, eh???

He was now a broken man, this was not the man he saw himself becoming one day. No, this was a cold ruthless being who had driven away all vestiges of love and warmth from his life.
He had changed, he had lost too much to be able to let some light seep into the enveloping darkness that filled his life.

So Arnav is broken as well, then we have Khushi on the other hand who's totally shattered. It's such a contrasting picture. Arnav is crying over his lost mother, and Khushi is crying over her lost love; Arnav... I know Khushi has been pinning for Arnav ever since, but has Arnav ever felt the same? I mean, in all these 8 years, has he ever realized that maybe, just maybe... he fell for Khushi too? I don't want to see Khushi more heartbroken than she already is... :/

However, I must say that I am really impressed with this story... I can clearly see the maturity in writing, especially in this piece! :)
Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
its getting more interesting.. continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Amazing story...
loved the update...continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
hope arshi meets soon...loved the concept...plz update me n buddy me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey, just saw this today. Interesting story. So Arnav has been through a lot after Khushi left and I was wondering where his GF is. He seems to be unaware of khushi's love. Hope they meet soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Lvly update...hope to see Arshi meeting soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Awesome update!

story is going interesting so far!!

continue soon...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Awesome!

Please continue soon!

Please PM me!
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago

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