Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 - Page 83

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Posted: 12 years ago
Two steps forward, one step back. A caring, "heart-constricting" Arnav coming to the fore and I for one am in grave danger of falling for him :) The description of the "dance" had me laughing out loud while the moments after the dance had me sighing - so well done you! The choice of song is inspired - shayad yeh pyar hai, Arnav!
This Shyam guy is getting braver and Khushi needs to trust her instincts when it comes to him.
I hope that Arnav and Khushi can have just a friendly conversation soon - one in which perhaps Arnav discovers Khushi's design talents - I would love to see them working together so that Arnav can learn more about the real Khushi and vice versa. Not that I am averse to some *ahem ahem* as well ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u hon!!!
Amazing update!!! loved loved loved it...
This Shyam guy is getting into my nerves now... He is trying to bring rift in their relationship!!! 😡😡
Awww the dance and the KISS!! 😳😳 I was hoping for more though... 😉😃 Besharam me!!

Anyways love where the story is going... Why i have this feeling that there gonna be a big fight between Arhi soon!! hhhmmm
Before the fight, Romance toh banta hai!! shadi ka mahol hai... bohat kuch hosakta hai... haina??!!! "Ahem ahem" 😃😆

great update!!
Excited for next update...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the story so far. Please continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: msin

Amazing just amazing... Boo hoo hoo Wednesday update done till next Wednesday..


By the way the song mere hath on me nau chudiyan hain... Has more suggestive lyrics than kuch khas ha..
It has lines ... Like. Mere darzi aaj meri Jung ho gayi kal choli silayi aaj tang ho gayi..
Tu ladki thi aaj patang ho gayi..
Mere Saiyan ne kya aaj kam tune...


I know from personal experience.. Innocent girls dance merrily in this song.. But immediately after being newly married it is impossible to dance I this song.,in front of your partner..because the lyrics are suggestive of lost innocence..😆..if u had incorporated this part would have been cute..my point..
This song and Athra baras from anjaam both have very racy lyrics.. Which innocent minds don't get on..😆


I am innocent 😳 so I put the song without knowing the lyrics that come down the line 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: amritab

Two steps forward, one step back. A caring, "heart-constricting" Arnav coming to the fore and I for one am in grave danger of falling for him :) The description of the "dance" had me laughing out loud while the moments after the dance had me sighing - so well done you! The choice of song is inspired - shayad yeh pyar hai, Arnav!
This Shyam guy is getting braver and Khushi needs to trust her instincts when it comes to him.
I hope that Arnav and Khushi can have just a friendly conversation soon - one in which perhaps Arnav discovers Khushi's design talents - I would love to see them working together so that Arnav can learn more about the real Khushi and vice versa. Not that I am averse to some *ahem ahem* as well ;)


what you say would only be logical wouldn't it Amrita? Not averse to *ahem ahem* eh? You are part of a group then 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a great update.. Thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update...
I will kill that shyam...creating more misunderstandings between the couple.

loved the way arnav took care of her to divert her mind from taunts..
And the dance is too sweet.
When will they understand that they both love each other...
Whenever I read Lakshmi I first think about goat and then was like sheis a human here.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Soloperson

K, I am proud to a stalker for DR, bcos ur updates are simply outstanding..

You were very successful in transporting me to DR land celebrating the mehendi, then awesome bike ride , with gust of wind blowing😉 , then back to haveli for that Dance and finally that steamy kiss!
Ahh life is indeed complete, till that creep Shyam shows up and poisons Khushi's mind...
Loved the update K and 🤗for the almost early update!!!


🤗 right back for your quick response...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oops.. another MU... but loved their dance and the kiss!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
very good chapter
stupid shyam😡
nice dance and kiss👏⭐️

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