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Evil Singh Raizada

@Dr.Strange

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: luv_arshi
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Bum aa gai???😲

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

tht was simply amazing one..

i loved it..

great idea sree i mst say..

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Loved the OS to the core...such a beautiful story...Kudos to you dear...Thanks for the PM

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kuhu

@kuhus_era

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

nice one re...
End me maan accha ni nikalta to tera khoon hojata aaj to [:X]...
Jalebi and khadoos... Kinne cute nics names he...
Thnx for a lovely OS ...
Tc
KUHU

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

loved the os so cute ans sweet love their nick names jalabi and kadoos awesome well written thanks for the pm

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

This story is as pagal n crazy as ur ideas are... N that's y we all love them.. Cos they are crazy n brilliant!!!!! Only u cd come up with this idea!!!!!!!

I loved it!!!!! Now be a good boy n update cmyad before u leave for ur trip!!!!😊

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Diksha

@Dt_goodgirl

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Lord Voldemort huh?

fits you perfectly(other than the fact that he didn't beliv in luv and you write luv stories😆 )

Now to the most magnificent, wonderful,awesome, feel good,cutest OS i have ever read in my time here in India Forums.😳(no makkhan lagana)

both parts were equally lovely and pagalpanti filled and you sir did not fail to amaze me👏

lovely characters all except maan obv. But i guess you put maan instead of shyam because you are too disgusted by the character itself.😆 no complaints there. 😛

because otherwise i would not have seen the character in new light and would have hated the character in the beginning itself.😆

so nice job... since there was going to be paagalpanti, i knew arhi will be together... i mean don't you always do that...(no complaints, because i hate the "forced" sad ones jismain kuch bura hona hi hota hai)pshhht those are super pathetic... 😉

Anyway coming back to this awesome os(which i have now copied and saved on my desktop) i mean it was solid gold caz the story was ZARA HATKE.👏

It was brilliant, awesome, spectacular. Just love it to the core😊

now CUPID ME takes over.😆

I read the first half of the os and it definitely looks like you have used yours and chocoangel's references. I know u don't call her jalebi, but she calls u khadoos.😛

So why does it look to me that this is going to be a future scenario where u might court chocoangel in mumbai.😆

and if this actually comes true i better get an invite to attend the marriage.😛

because whatever happens, even i will attend this marriage if it takes place.😆

And i can tell ur children or grandchildren that i played cupid🤣

am just kidding btw. though there is nothing wrong in u getting married to chocoangel.😳

I hope i haven't hurt either of you. it was just my pagalpanti due to this pagalpanti overdose.😳

have read it thrice already and feel sad that i can't press like more times. but literally you have blown me away today by this wonderful cute and lovely doze od arhi(or pre-gel) *hides behind a wall*😳

just kidding. though if you are offended, kindly let me know and i'll edit my comment.😳(don't scold me please)😳

Diksha😳