Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3

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ravalisharma06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#921

read it in one go...

superb

beautifulyy written...

plz pm me when u update it...

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#922

Sigh, after reading this entire story in one go, I seriously find myself wishing that IPKKND had chosen this track instead of the ridiculously filmi kidnapping track. This is so beautiful and real and I can't express it in words how much I love the words you weave- I can't wait for your next update!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#923

nafisa,

iam missing this FF

when r u planning to update this next dear

I know I know u are busy with NYR now - will wait

I just finished reading all the 48 chapters, once more - I couldn't do it in one shot - infact it took me almost 2 weeks to finish re-reading the whole thing (because of my tight schedule) but I would say the re-read was just excellent - there is nothing, like getting to read this whole thing once again - I enjoyed it nafisa - u r an excellent writer - this has been beautifully written - i would mark this as one of the BEST ffs i have ever read

but really nafisa, u need to update this more often dear - its almost 2 years now since u started this - hoping to read an update of this soon after u r done with NYR

thanks

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Oliver.Queen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Jus read it again. Plz update

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sskaug25

@sskaug25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#925

A wonderful chapter. loved how khushi ran to him and hugged him and how she said that she is with him and she will never leave him. Now what's Anjali planning? Waiting eagerly for next chapter. It was a beautiful chapter

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#926

After seeing Khushi and Arnav battle out their personal demons ,to finally emerge victorious is extremely overwhelming.

When Arnav was down and out and Khushi was just a shadow of her prior self , you had poured out the emotions in those updates which used to make me feel so forlorn and now with your precious writing the excitement , the anticipation and the reunion of their love makes me blush like a new bride.

It was so utterly adorable to see Khushi accept Arnav in her wide open arms and to see Arnav being his roguish self was exhilarating to say the least.Their little lovers tiff was too cute.

Coming to the Anjali and Shyam part , well seems like she has fallen in his trap but i have a feeling you will not make this Anjali so irresponsible ..maybe just maybe she has provided him the bait instead!

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awroneema

@awroneema

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Posted: 11 years ago

#927

hey...nafisa..read the whole...i must say u r awesome...loved it...

i have to mention these...u have written...ASR's confession as ."i love u damn it"...and ASR creating a ceiling of star lights for khushi so that she feels close to her parents back then...and in actual it also happened in the serial...wow...girl...amazing...hope to read more and waiting for ASR and ARJ confession...may Allah bless u..

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#928

I came across this ff sometime during summer last year and I was blown away. Your writing is one of a kind, very extraordinary. I was a bit disappointed with the update schedule frankly speaking. There's nothing as frustrating as in when a good story is left unfinished. But then you've returned with a bang I presume;) and I can't be happier.
I absolutely love Khushi-Arnav relation which goes way deeper than emotions can imply. The pleading of Khushi to let her bear her share of burdens and then some of his really was very touching. And actually the Arnav that we know is quite a lonely person whom nobody understood. His possessive and protective streaks are taken granted for by his family. High time he can let his guard down and share his grief with his partner as well.