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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#821

i was off the radar for a while and hence the late comment; also im afraid bc u update so late that i have to go back and re-read the last chapter. khair

lovely and to the point as always. wished i could read more from u

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

i am completely in awe of your writing talent. incredible. I f we actually had the more talented writers like yourself, working on the IPK script, the series would have been incredible throughout.

but i digress. this was great, i loved the role reversal. much needed. he has been Atlas for a while.

i will be honest and admit that anjali was one of my least favorite characters on the show. my reasons are varied. one, i find it almost impossible to believe that a woman who almost obsessed over her Shyamji would be so blind to the patterns of his life and his absences. Then the fact that a life experience namely her traumatic past that everyone around her used as a learning experience she chose to rely on a crutch, namely her obsession with poojas. Yet when the truth of shyam was exposed she did not turn to her faith to make sense of the chaos. so in my mind even the expression of piety she professed was a front. I found little that was genuine about her. her "love" for her husband her love for her unborn child, her love for her brother, her piety. everything. she turned her back on her brother and her faith so then it begs the question, what is sacred in this woman's life? the answer i come up with is ...? literally nothing.

i know in your story, anjali is aware of the truth and i hope that she turns that knowledge into a stepping stone and becomes what i can respect, a strong woman. after all failures are failures only if we let them be. if we learn from our failures, they become stepping stones to success

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

loved the update and the role reversal of Arnav and khushi
this kind of changed their relationship's dynamics and put them for each other
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm:) and sorry for the late comments

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Aishwarya

@EmpressSarayu

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

I really like re-reading this story. I keep coming back to it.

Its so emotional yet I can the two of them growing and trusting each other.

And Anjali being so more than just the damsel. Bril! :D

OH! AND I LOVE YOUR PHOTO. "SHERLOCKED". *DROOL*
I hope you won't wait till the next episode of 'Sherlock' to write more!
Please don't pull a Moffat!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

Wow...looking forward to reading this FF...

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

Phew!!! I read it all in one go! It took me a week, but I loved it. Amazing writing, pls could u pm me when u update? Thanks for sharing such a brilliant story on Arshi!.

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

pretty please with 1000 cheerie n top

pls dnt stop here

pls pls continue and add me n PM list as well

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

I so want to read this story further. Hope you can continue soon.

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mysterieux

@mysterieux

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

I read you FF all 3 threads all at the same time...(so you imagine...how much I enjoyed it👍🏼) I had so much fun reading and not havingto wait like everyone has been😆...now comes my turn to wait...I wanna read more...dil maange more...update soon Nafisa...pretty please!