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amv63

@amv63

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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Nafisa,

First, you have to stop being so worried about our reactions to your story(ies). You are a wonderful, talented writer and you have absolutely no reason to be so diffident about readers' responses. We love your work, as evinced by the number of likes and comments you receive. ❤️👏

I would have written this in a PM but you say your inbox is choking with messages, so I thought I'd say it here because I think everyone who reads your stories will agree with me. What say, ladies?

I do not comment on every chapter because life is really hectic, but believe me, I read every one, sometimes twice over.

Over the past few updates, you have slowly shown the growing trust, the bond between Arnav and Khushi. Besides being physically closer, they are also now coming together emotionally. Khushi's right, it's time Arnav stopped shouldering this burden on his own. He has to know that just as he has the right to kiss his wife "wherever and whenever" he likes, she also has the right to share his sorrows together with his joys. He cannot keep on protecting her and Anjali. They are strong women and need to feel as if they are contributing to the happiness of the man they both love.

You brought out Anjali's feelings beautifully in the previous chapter when she actually felt a sense of achievement at having helped Shashi in the temple. She has been treated like a helpless, hapless invalid for far too long. It's time everyone sees the inner strength she possesses.

So, sweetie, you are doing great 👍🏼, a genuine ⭐️, and here's a great big 🤗 for you.

Okay, now I'm off to read about New Year ...

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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#732

I love this FF and all your work! Your writing and all your stories are so addictive, I can't wait for your next part! 👏

Thanks for the update and thanks for still writing on IF!

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x-Ri-Ri-x

@x-Ri-Ri-x

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Excellent bed time read! I saved the last chapter so read both in one go. Very nicely written. Enjoyed it loads x

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: saucechips
*blushes*

*blushes harder*

Hum bhi aapse I love you dammit! In fact, hum aapse thoda zyada I love you dammit!

I was actually lucky to have made this for you, you know? That was the ONLY way it could have got so much of praise considering the photoshop experts which reside in this place. You totally didn't need to do this and I am so glad you liked it and that is just enough.

You be an awesome writer dammit! I would totally chhe mahine contract marriage you anyday. 😃

Lots of love,
Sabi :)

- By the way, nobody's going to believe that I've made this. What with it being serious and all 😆

Aaaww, Saucechips, that was such a sweet banner, very apt for DE's terrific story.

I can imagine those puffed out cheeks getting puffier while the razor sharp teeth gnaw away at the corn in a mix of emabrassment and pleasure at the well-deserved compliment that that DE has paid you in her special note!!!

Chomp away Ms. Chipmunk! I've always loved your DP! itis one terrific DP😃

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: bakula_gandhi
waiting for the next update

I've updated! :)

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
Update was very nice
continue soon

Thank you!!

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: rashgirl000
awesome update.
loved it totally.
continue soon.

Thank you! And all the best with your exams :)

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: Barunz4ever
OMG just finished reading this wonderful FF
It took about more than a year for u to come till here n I read all the chapters in 3 days
How did I miss this superb FF n luv the Arnav of ur story tooo much
It wud really be amazing to c our IPK gng this way giving equal justice to all the characters
N about ur writing skills wat do I say words are really less to describe ur immense talent coz ur the queen of words , queen of adjectives , queen of emotions, queen of thoughts
Ur thorough writing skills n the intricate words n language u use is just amazingly incomparable !!!!!!!!
Indeed one of the best writers we have
Waiting for next update impatiently

Awww thank you sooo much!!! I am so super happy you've enjoyed this FF so much, and utterly overwhelmed by your kind words and appreciation! Thank you so much for taking the time to read this FF and sharing your feedback! Those are some of the sweetest compliments I've ever been paid - It means a lot to me :)

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: Nooro
Res... --------Unres...😃 OMG girl how u manage 2 jobs n this awesome amazing n Extraaa looonng update...I definitly love ur updates one reason because they are sooo loonngg...so dont say that we have to bear with it because we just love toread loong updates * i know i know greedy people we are* coming towards update...

Lol, I'm glad you enjoy the long updates - the reason they get so long is because I have trouble updating regularly so I try to make up for the delays...and this one was an important chapter and I just couldn't stop writing til I'd put down everything I wanted to say. In fact, I was kind of shocked when I saw how long it was :P

Just one word WOOOWW...totally ArHi n yet so many emotions in just one call... Arnav's confused state n surprisingly Khushi's call just to know about his whereabouts...how she expertly got to know of his emotional weakness n all his worries...how he tried to ditch the queston but at the end he just let go...Loved khushi when she claimed herself as his wife...how Arnav openly let go of all emotions which were pent up in him...Their worry regarding the CHOOSE B/W di n Khushiquestion n How khushi gave him all his answers without him asking them...Their relationship has progressed aloott..

I'm so glad you've enjoyed all the emotional layers to this chapter and really happy that you picked them all out and mentioned them here! Thank you!

Naughtiness in the end was lovelyyy,,i must say cherry on top..what he will do to make her miss him...u left us on a little bit cliffhanger with this one..

Lol, yup it's a cliffy...you'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out what he did :P

So next update will b a roller coaster one i mean Emotional roller coaster with *hmmm lemme guess* both telling Di about Shyam n she would surprise them by proof about That scoundrel...

Hmmm...maybe ;) I won't give away too much, but I'm hoping what'll happen in the next chapter won't be too obvious :P

ok ok u know na I have already started waiting for next update...wish u good luck or ur life... 'yess i do appreciate ur idea of not leacing ur faithful readers...thannnxxx alloot for pm dear...

Thank you sooo much for reading and for your lovely feedback!

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

now update this one jaldi jaldi

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: soppy
Okay if this chapter was not up to the mark then i dont know what is?
This was such an important chapter in their relationship!
I was waiting when they would take the first step in being equals!
Please update soon!

Thank you!! I'm so relieved and happy that you liked it, and enjoyed the progression in their relationship!! Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views :) :)