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Jenna

@LondonChick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

That was AMAZING. How could you even think that was not up to the mark? I literally got this PM just as I got ready for bed. I was gonna read it tomorrow morning but I could not resist and had to read it.

And when I saw you mention it was long it made me even happier. I swear I read every word and tooki it in like a thirsty person does an oasis in the dessert.

Just the other day I read this again cover to cover word for word and i just loved the way you showed the change in Arhis relationship.

And today you have managed to do it again by showing the role reversal of Arhi. It was just so beautifully done.

You know this was the first FF I ever started reading on IF so I will always uave a soft spot for it. I just love love love it!

And hats off to you for managing two jobs, a normal life and IF you are like a real life superwoman for being able to manage all of those tihs.

And thank you for the PM
God bless
Jenna

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soppy

@soppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Okay if this chapter was not up to the mark then i dont know what is?
This was such an important chapter in their relationship!
I was waiting when they would take the first step in being equals!
Please update soon!

Edited by soppy - 12 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

what the ... this chapter was not up to mark well then i don't know what is i loved the update loved the support khushi has given him loved how she showed him he is not alone and he did not have to be responsible for everyone it was such a well deserved and very important chapter in their relationship the growing bond the equality that was needed in their relationship their first step of understand that both will always be there for each other loved the update beautifully done loved how she showed him she was glad that he could not chose showing her that he held her in the same level with anajli thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Wow... thank you for the long update and what a fabulous one at that.

I have to say that last paragraph was my most favorite part where she asserts her position demands him to get her back and deal with the situation together.

I almost felt like cheering at that point... its like all the tension up to this stage had reached a boiling point and i was wondering when will Khushi come back cause Arnav needs her like anything.

And also to say when she calls him LG and that whole conversation was a full on seeti bajaoing moment !😆

I am so awaiting for their conversation...especially since Anjali's reaction is gonna surprise them for sure !

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Aplihs

@Aplihs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Loved it and can rt wait for more. Also many thanks for continuing to post . it is truly appreciated. I hope these people misusing peoples work stop and realize how much they harm us all .

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Atyay

@Atyay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Wonderful update! 👏 I'm liking this new stand in their relationship - being equals!

Thank you for the PM.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Gorgeous post!

I could feel the anxiety of both Arnav and Khushi, though I think Khushi is right: the blame lies squarely on Shyam and only he is to blame for duping so many good people. Khushi has become so comfortable around Arnav in a way that she phoned him for some solace.

I know Arnav is torn between Anjali and Khushi, but I think Anjali will surprise him. Now I want to know what is Anjali up to? What does Shyam plan to do???

And what did Khushi do to Arnav that we're going to get a peek of in the next chapter? 😆 So glad you're still posting on IF!

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#678

Great conversation between A and K. Lovely chapter.

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#679

a very emotional update, loved it, loved the conversation between them, loved the way khushi was supporting arnav, reasuring him that he is not alone, she is with him all the way, brilliant.

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Oliver.Queen

@Oliver.Queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#680

It was such a great update! Wonderfully written as always. I like the way you are slowly showing the strength and the bonding in Arnav and khushi's relationship. I liked the part where Khushi explains to Arnav the complexities of his guilty feeling. Great job.