Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 - Page 39

Just read your FF in one go . Wow fantastic FF . Loved the way arnav is repenting and making up for all the things he had done to her . And loved the fact that khushi did not forgive him immediately . That is reality . And arnav telling everything he ever did to khushi to shashi was a masterstroke . Wow well done . Last but not the least LOL when she compared him to a jalebi and the way she confessed her love in a fit of anger while defending her beloved jalebis 😛 . Awww :) . Now I feel they can face anything the world and fate throws at them .

Please please please continue. I started reading your stories yesterday and I have no words, your writing is beautiful. Now that IPKKND is finished we need our brilliant writers on this forum to get the rest of us through this depressing phase.

Hello. Yes, this comment comes awfully late, but then, so do your updates, right? 😈

You know what I love the most about your writing? That it is so detailed that I can actually visualize the fabulous actors IPK had acting out these scenes. & all these missed opportunities make me sad st the way things turned out for the show. Yes well, I'm being senti, but a little leeway for it is deserved I suppose. Sigh.

Anyway, coming to the two parts of your update. Shashi has always been one of my favourite characters, terribly underused on the show, but wonderfully resurrected by you here. Such a good, empathetic person, the best one to handle the vulnerable Anjali right now. This is one of those precious few stories where I really, really love Anjali. I loved that line Shashi said about his having faith in her. Very intuitive on your part, because frankly, nobody else on earth feels that way about Anjali - not Khushi, and certainly not Arnav. This woman has always been mollycoddled by those who love her, and that has definitely stifled her as a person who can trust herself. Very beautiful scene in the Gupta House.👏

Arnav is a jalebi!!!! Mushy, loopy? 🤣
Only Khushi can come up with this, when she's actually trying to say 'I love you'. & I think you've been absolutely spot-on with the confessions of both the characters. An anger-laced 'dammit' for Arnav, and a spontaneous verbal diarrhoea starring jalebies for Khushi. Just perfect. I am looking forward to the rest of this conversation eagerly. 😉

I have always loved that your Arnav is massively guilt-ridden without being self-sacrificing. Suits the character to a T. & it's there in all of your writings. Yes I've read the all, and am now considering spamming (something I've never done before) in all your threads to get you to update faster. Consider yourself warned.😳

Gosh I really do write a lot. Oh well, I blame your writing skills for that.

Ok. So finally I read this!

Beautiful update as ususal. You are an amazing writer. PLEASE UPDATE SOON .

*jumps with excitement*

Well Ive been doing that lietrally over the past few updates of MDJND !😃
And the emo above, is no match to how wide Ive been smiling all along !

I'll go to the most exciting part the last OK !
So the relationship you've built between Anjali and Shashi !
I wish, they'd done it in the show tooo ! He notices so many similarities between Khushi and Anjali, and he is so caring ! He definitely was a great father, could have been shown so much better on the show, but Im so glad you made up for it !

And Anjalim the emotions she feels, the way she feels that she has never had the chance to look after, but always being looked upon ! That desparation in her to be given just one chance to prove herself ! And Shashi does trust her, give her that chance ! And Im excitedly waiting for the next part ! And Nafi, I loved the way you so easily switched the moods between ArHi and Anjali ! Usually I hate it when Anjali comes in between, but this time, I didnt mind a bit !

And then !
The biggest thing of all !
Khushi finallly said I love you to Arnav ! Well not as directly as he had, butr she in her own Khushi way called him a Jalebi, and Im corry, but I couldnt help grinning over there at all ! IU was blushing, my cheeks were so hot, and I was so flustered up over there ! Haiii ! That was the sweetest sugary confession I would have ever read ! And so *crushes you tight in a hug* I love you for that !

And Arnav, taking it all in, so concerned ! Sure he is lucky ! And oh I cant get over the expressions you gave when Khushi tells him she loves him ! Haiii ! That was such a lovely scene !

Khushi, Oh Khushi meri jaan ! (OK , that was crazy, but that's how I feel after reading you update)
The emotions she goes through, the amount of happiness she feels, its almost like the whole world is at her feet ! And believe me , when you described her so happy, I felt so glad from within, almost as though she;s been served justice for all the wrong that life seemed to give her, cause as much as I try, Im a feminist ! (why do I get carried away ?)

And I tell you, you';re mean, but sweetly so ! It took me 3 days to write god knows whatever Ive written ! And please forgive me, cause I can never do justice to your updates Nafisa ! You just blow me away into ArHi dreamland everytime !😃 And I so love you for that *another crushing hug*

*dances* Khushi called Arnav a jalebi😃
I Love you !

Have just started reading ... please bear with me ... will comment when I finish ... 😃

OMG, You are an AMAZING writer. Your fic was suggested as a must read by a forum member esmeralda111 in her post 'My favourite writers and their notable work on IF'. I am so glad I came across that post. Cause I got to read this AMAZING story. You have done a fantastic job so far. Keep up the good work. Hope you update soon.

Please please please please update!