Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

@revathysugathan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Loved it 😊 The tension in the car, their love and how much Arnav understands Khushi - perfectly portrayed 😊

And the way you described how Anjali sees herself was perfect too. Hope Bauji can help her.

All in all, worth the wait 👏

Plz update the next part soon dear and thanks for the PM ❤️

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

love this update!

Khushi comparing Arnav to jalebis and his reaction to that was

priceless... and she told him she loves him while continuing her rant...😃

loved the bit about Anjali and Sashi...

waiting for the next update!

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Sigh! That was beautiful!
I srsly don't know where do I start from...
Arhi were amazing...khushi's restlessness nervousness so beautifully explained that wen she actually said it I read the thing about 3,4 times :p
And I was practically having butterflies in my stomach with expectations...
With all the happenings currently in their life trust arhi to actually debate on jalebis...! :p
Anjali and shashi...completely outstanding!
The next chapter seems interesting for both the parts of the story...
Can't wait plz try to make it quick! Thankyou!;)
Great update!
Loved it! Thanks for the pm:)