#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3 - Page 63

Originally posted by: shaani2209

Read both the parts in one shot..

Awesome start...liked the way you have started by keeping the story as shown to us in the show..

in the second part loved the way you have continued from what was shown to, what you thought about n the change you got by showing kria calling up vishaka...

but one question the last line of the part 2 was suppose to be said by kria kya??? or it was vishakha only who says it???

thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: namratajadhav

awesum

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

Haha then you'll have to do yourself :P Get the first reserve..

Originally posted by: chimpukli10

k..srry fr late reply..it was nice..but bohot chotha tha...
😳

Originally posted by: asmaju

I love u for this...

Yeah lo cyber bone crushing hug🤗🤗

Originally posted by: asmaju

My Mission 2day:)

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

hehe good luck =D

Originally posted by: swaronehad3

hey nice upd8 dear 👏

thanx 4 d pm 😉

plz upd8 d nxt part soon 😊

n also upd8 ur otha 3 ff's soon 😃

Originally posted by: asmaju

yup dats neede..Ppll attackthis thread fast..

Pata nahi Deetha kaha hai..

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

loved it...

that goofy smile on rey was so imaginable...

loved it...