ArHi SS: Dark Side- Chapt 8 Pg 45 *Updated* 30/8/13

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Dimple

@scorpionsavenge

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Holy crap Shyam is one deranged animal in this fic! But i love it :D LOL I knew Khushi setting up those candles and whatnot for Arnav was too good to be true. Great story, cant wait for the next update!

And btw, i love the song you based your story on!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

oh boy not good not good at all
haila that was bad no terrifying for sure
damn and double damn he found her huh
and not only found her but took her away too
in all this arnie has no clue where khushi is or that she had been trying to contact him from so long
oh dear why did this have to happen
and it was all trap for khushi
the contract was baseless
will he be able to find khushi now

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Hey!

I just came across this today and after reading the two chapters, I'm left a little numb.

I think my heartbeats have increased just by reading the second chapter and in particular, Shyam's filthy treatment of Khushi. The guy seriously needs professional help. 😡😡😡

Very well written and descriptive.

I cannot wait to read part three already! 😃

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

RUNNN Khushi Run 🤗

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saarah96

@saarah96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

wow that was an amazing start
argh shyam,,cant believe he put khushi through that
and hope arnav saves her=/

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Mahrin17478

@Mahrin17478

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Shyam a maniac...very nice update...pls pm for the next part

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Frances

@Punkin22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Dynamic beginning. You had my interest by the third sentence. Very emotional, our Khushi is in one painful mess. Look forward to next update. Thank you for post and pm.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

superb !!! loved it... thanks for pm 😊

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

@PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Hey its great : )

You MUST continue soon dear...

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

finally u updated!!!!

It was good.. Shyam is a pathetic psycho.. he trapped Khushi..

I'm glad she didn't fell into his trap again when he blackmailed her on the name of Arnav's life. along with mud, she should have kicked him in his groin... But I'm a bit relieved that she's fighting back the devil⭐️