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ipkknd-fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Nice loved it
Plz continue and pm me the other updates plz :)

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Bhaktikapasi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Pls pls pls continue. Loved it

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kgmu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

its beautiful ...riya in arjun arm pls continue n up date soon

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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

In terms of writing and flow it's superb.
Arjun seems quiet out of character though, if he is compared to the present Arjun.
Show wala Arjun would most probably give her an earfull .
This scenario is possible too
Arjun is unpredictable na.
Great work dear!

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poojdc87

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Poor Riya baby, always hurt!! Loved your story!! Update soon!

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Warriorhigh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Pm me Next part!! (when it's done)

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Aukview

@Aukview

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
wow yaar such a cute os i like it
and about the title hmmm
Danger love

Heya! Thank You for the title suggestion 😊

Edited by Aukview - 13 years ago

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Aukview

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: FeistySoul
In terms of writing and flow it's superb.
Arjun seems quiet out of character though, if he is compared to the present Arjun.
Show wala Arjun would most probably give her an earfull .
This scenario is possible too
Arjun is unpredictable na.
Great work dear!

Hey Thanks a lot for the comment 😊 I know what you mean by out of character but in this part Riya is supposed to be in a bad state - she is just tortured and she is bleeding and stuff so I really hope Arjun wouldn't shout at her even in the show if something like this happens 😛

But I hope you'll find him more in character in the coming updates...fingers crossed! 😛

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-Raichu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

It's too nice to stop here ! Please continue !

It was awesome I loved it !!!

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Mary

@-Blueberry-

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Hey,

Well what do I say? I am spellbound by only reading the first part so I sincerely and humbly wish that you will continue this and take this story to a new level! All I can say is that I am bookmarking this and that you've got me hooked! 👏

Wow, are we actually seeing a softer side of Arjun - I wonder when the CV's will be generous and show us these type of scenes in the show. Well, it's only started but please do continue this!!

-Mary 😉

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