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friends_4dream

@friends_4dream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

superb,,
but was a small part anyways awesome
cont.soon

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Aww it's a girl... lovely update... I was expecting Arnav to come running to the hospital concerned but he wasn't informed... will he get to know later??

Can't wait for the next update😃

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#733

TO begin with...i want to tell you that i owe you an apology!!!

the reason being i started reading the story almost with first update itself and really loved your writing...but then stopped it when i read in the precap that anjali wanted their child!!! i thought that now arnav would be adamant on fulfilling his di's wish and will again hurt khushi...

but today i started from were i left and realized what a fool i was...it was entirely my loss!!!!

its such a beautiful and touching story...khushi here is more practical!! i like that about her not ready to give her first born to di...bcoz obviously thats not possible for a woman!!! her efforts to have harmony in the family even when dadi is so rude to her...thats what a ideal indian bahu tries to do!!! the constant fear that her inlaws will cosider her responsible for her husband's behavior is so natural

arnav and his journey towards fatherhood which is the essence of the story is portrayed amazingly...how he was happy in the beginning just because khushi was happy...then the fears...then how unknowingly he became attached to kiddo who was once just the foetus to him!!! the way he felt the fear of something wrong happening to the baby for the first time and compared it with the feeings which he felt for khushi and di...was so emotional!! and the man who didn't even think about becoming a father in the first place is dreaming of having a baby girl...such a wonderful way to show him growing as a father!!!

hope i have made up for all the missing comments!!!

trust me i just couldn't stop myself from writing all this!!!

do pm me when you update

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.ProperPatola

@.ProperPatola

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Posted: 12 years ago

#734

awww!! another amazing updatee!! loved it! very well written!!

adorable...its a baby girl! just as arnav's dream!😳 as for the name suggestions...can it be Arsh? or Arshi?? i think it suits!😊

Thanks for the pm😊

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gauri

@GAURI29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#735

wow its baby girl...
im so happy
keep her name as KIARA or ANAYA

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#736

just read both the parts... nice to see how much each was missing the other but not knowing how to take the first step... loved the arnav-anjali convo... kudos to you for having anjali decide to adopt a baby girl who's not very well, as the first step toward moving on, and not depend on marrying first! good of her to have taken khushi's advice and understood what she's been saying all this while. really loved the fact that the news of the adoption was first shared with khushi, meaning that their relationship is on the road to mending... couldn't understand arnav's reluctance at this news, but it was funny to see his focus shift from it to khushi! also, would be damn interesting to learn what dadl's reaction to this news is!

arnav's realisation of the baby as an individual, as his and as someone he can share something with was very well depicted... applaud his decision to go and get his wifew back!

thank god khushi and the baby are fine and that they're having a baby girl! khushi's decision to return to RM is the right one... the precap is truly moving... eager for the next part!

what do you think of Arushi as the baby's name?

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#737

loved tht part...a baby girl for our Arshi...
omg u name for arshi girl
y not Arshi or Arushi...

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chemistry9

@chemistry9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#738

awsm

loved it

waiting fr d nxt

thnx fr d pm

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sur91

@sur91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#739

I'm so excited that they are having a girl. I have a 4 month old niece and I love her more than my life and seeing her I too want a baby girl when I get married. So thank u for giving them a girl. It's so fab

Now coming to the name. I have one in mind: ARuSHI. It's a mixture of ARnav and KHushi

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Saima

@Diaphanous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#740

Omg! Well first of all, happy birthday to ur niece and her mother!
Second of all, it was amazing! U r such a good writer.

I will be waiting for ur update!!