SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

a beautiful update, handled in a mature and realistic fashion... loved how khushi lit into arnav revealing how much that baby meant to her as well as arnav's realisation of how his unthinking promise to anjali nearly destroyed khushi... though a confrontation, it was needed to reveal their real feelings and fears... also loved how they say things in anger but quickly realise how that much hurt the other and then try to remedy the situation... the scene where khushi breaks down and can't seem to stop and arnav's attempts to pacify her was heart-rending and heart-warming at the same time... the precap was beautiful... can't wait for the update!

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

one of the best SS..great going

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#313

An amazing update...you wrote it so beautifully...yupp that was exactly we needed at this moment...a strong khushi who does not give up her self respect for ppl who dont know how to respect neither themselves nor others...and yeah i too agree with the fact that you stated in your ff...that arnav still is not attached with the baby and that is what am looking forward to read...thanks for pm:)

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Awww this part was too adorable <333
Loved every bit of it...Arhi fight was intense and hawt !!!
M feeling so awsm at Khushiz determination...this FF is gng gr8 !!!

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---Sonia---

@---Sonia---

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#315

Ow, l like it😊 very nice update continue soon and thanks for pm me

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

wow...thanx for the pm...

you amaze me every time i read an update...what a marvellous story...and amazing writing style...

anjali is so full of herself...so selfish...

and arnav...realllyyy????? dude , r u crazy????

poor khushi ...but love her strong character here...and the way she stood up for her wants and wishes...👏...wow

cant wait for khushi to teach arnav to love this baby as much as he loves her...which he does...and i love that...

wonder what manipulative crap anjali is going to come up with next...her slimy hubby really rubbed off on her...didnt he????

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Thrishna

@Thrish

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#317

Thanx for the pm... loved the update...

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zarlish18

@zarlish18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#318

fabulous

plz can u write longer updates

xxx

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Sweta...

@Sweta...

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#319

I can't wait for arnav to be deseperate for their child tbh!mgoodmuodate, very sad though! Thanks for the pm :)

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Farah

@farah53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: zarlish18
fabulous
plz can u write longer updates
xxx

Longer updates?? I hope for my sake that you aren't being sarcastic..

Because I have a really tough time shortening the updates, you know?? Every time I start writing about this couple I just wanna go o & on & on.. It feels like,"oh no! can't stop here.. this ain't finished yet!"..I know,silly right??🤪

Anyways, the next chapters may well be longer, as you know what a stubborn person ASR can be when he has to be taught something without him knowing,right? & plus, bad news, I don't think I can wrap up the story this week, as it just keeps pouring ot of my heart!! But I promise next week I will out of here!😉