FF: #Kambhaqht Ishq# Part 6 updated. pg.19 :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello! This is my first FF, so it may not be up to your standards and Im really sorry about that...😊 Feel free to throw chappals and vegetable at me, if you don't like it. Please do comment and don't forget to like as that will motivate me to write more. If I get over 30 likes, I will continue. Please give your opinion on concept+story. I am going to introduce the characters first and post Part 1.
Thanks ! 😛
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Main Characters:

Arnav Singh Raizada: Owner of AR company. Goes to Sydney to seal a deal and to meet a few clients. He is a laid back and is a playboy kind of guy. He is a playboy, and takes any chance to flirt with a girl. He is 26 years old.

Khushi Malhotra: A journalist. She is writing an article, and she has been sent to Sydney and has been asked to live there for a while to capture the true life and atmosphere of Sydney. She will be staying in Sydney with her older sister for about 2 months. Khushi is 23 years old.

Akash Singh Raizada : He is 24 years old and is Arnav's younger cousin/brother. Currently living with NK and also a University student, in his final year.

Payal Malhotra: Khushi's elder sister. She is completing her second degree after Bachelor of in Intl. Law . She won a scholarship and is a University student, also in her final year. Payal and Akash are both class fellows. She is the same age as Akash, only a few months younger.

NK: Completes the Raizada trio. He is their cousin. Older than Akash by 7 months but younger than Arnav. NK owns many hotels and holiday villas and is 24, turning 25 in a few months.

Side Characters (They will become more involved in the story as the story goes on):

Anjali/Di: Arnav's, Akash's, Alisha's and NK's elder sister. Modern girl, but has traditional values. (Think of Anjali in jeans and a top/kurta with the same ponytail hairstyle she had in the "Delhi Mein Bali" episode or her normal hairstyle she has , that's her look). She is 27 years old.

Akshay: Anjali's husband. They were class fellows and Akshay is a lawyer. Anjali is also a lawyer and they both work together. (And no, he is not like snakewa). He is a year older than Anjali.

Alisha/ Al (Nickname) : The youngest of the Raizada siblings. She is 21 and is very close with Arnav and and NK and Anjali. Anjali is like a role model to her and she wants to be like her.

Nani: The Raizada siblings Nani. She is like a mother to them.

Manorma Mami/ Mami: The Raizada sibling's mami. Akash's mother.

Mama ji: Manorma's husband.

More characters who might be introduced further in the story, will be added here !

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Chapter 1

At RM

Arnav: So I should reach Sydney by Wednesday evening. I'm leaving tomorrow morning.

Akash: Ok Bhai. I'll pick you up then.

Arnav: I'll call you when my flight lands. Is that fine?

Akash: Sure. Bhai, mujhe jaana padega. Someone's at the door.

Arnav: Chal, Bye. I'll call you when I leave Delhi.

Akash: Bye.

Arnav thought he should go and tell Nani and the rest of the family members that he had called Akash and had confirmed that Akash would be picking him up. He closed his cupboard and went down to the lounge room. He bumped into Alisha, as she was reading her magazine. He caught her before she stumbled and pulled her towards him.

Alisha: Sorry bhaiyya, I got so engaged in my magazine, ke maine dekha nayi aapko. Thank god you caught me !

Arnav: Arey, koi baat nayi chotti. Yeah, be thankful that you have a brother who catches his sister when she falls. You should be proud!

He teased her and ruffled her hair. They both laughed and then Arnav let go of his sister. They went down to where the family members were sitting.

Arnav: Nani, maine Akash se baat karli hai, aur voh mujhe Sydney airport se pick up karlega. Main kal subah yahan se nikal jaounga.

Nani: Tikhe Chotte. Have you packed everything you will need ?

Arnav: Ji Nani.

Anjali: Toh Chotte tum Sydney ja rahe ro. Vahan par kitni ladkiyon ko apne jaal mein fasana hai?

She teased him. Arnav smirked, as he thought how well his Di knew about his habits.

Arnav: Di...uhh pata nayi. Agar koi plane mein hi mil jaye toh use kaam chalalunga.

Anjali shaked her head...laughing.

Anjali: Tum kabhi nayi sudroge!

Arnav: I know. Im gonna go and sleep now. K ? Good night.

Anjali: Good night chotte.

He went back to his room and checked if everything had been packed. Feeling sleepy, he went to bed reminding himself that his flight was early in the morning.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting FF 👏
continue soon nd add me to ur buddy list 🤗
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sounds interesting!!!!! pls let me know when you continue.
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Originally posted by: darksydeangel

interesting FF 👏

continue soon nd add me to ur buddy list 🤗
btw first to comment

Thank you 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey simi!!! I am not the first one!!! BUT I AM ON THE FIRST PAGE!!! 😆 Awesome start!!! So our ASR is not a angry young man!!! Can't wait to see how their first meeting turns out to be!!!! Are they going to fight...??? 😉 And I love how the setting is Sydney!!! 😉😆 I love the bond Arnav has with his siblings!!! I have a feeling that he is a very GOOD brother!!! 😳Please continue soon...do I have to say anything about the PM or is it a given!!! 😆 Jaldi se update karo!!! 😛


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omg..loved it..contiue soon...do pm me if u update...
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chotti terrific start sweetie !!!!
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wow awsuuum start dear...loved it very much...please continue soon...👏
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i love the concept
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Hey, Woww... Its really nice and welll written... Dont think that you are writing for the first time...and Hum tho aap ko gulaab maarenge (loved it)... Hope to read more updates from your end... Please do PM me...

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